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Kherty's Characters and Projects | Feedback and Index - Kherty - 05-31-2023
Index and Feedback for my characters and projects
Here are my current characters and their backstories. If there is no thread about it, a description will be available here. Please provide feedback and let me know if my characters are well-written and portrayed. I also welcome general feedback. Thank you very much for your time!
The RV Tempus Fugit is a gunboat owned by a ruthless explorer. It serves as both a research vessel and a means of transportation in the Omicrons. The ship has undergone extensive modifications at the expense of its armor, providing only a minor upgrade compared to most gunboats.
William Hawkins is a crewman serving in the 1st Armada. He was previously an Ensign in the Forty-Sixth Fleet and was offered a position in the First Armada during its early stages. Alongside his former superiors from the Forty-Sixth, William accepted the offer. He is a relatively new pilot in the Navy, known for his kindness and generosity. However, he often feels envious of his peers due to his skills not reaching the average level.
Alfredo Orsini is the Principal of the Unione Corse and has been its leader since a reshuffle in the organization's hierarchy. He negotiated a deal with the Gallic Union, securing official recognition for the Unione Corse and making it a guardian alongside the Union. Previously expelled as a medical doctor due to his illicit methods of treating patients, particularly with Nox,
Alfredo joined the Unione Corse out of frustration. He utilized his medical knowledge to continue underground research on Nox within the organization and eventually rose to the position of Principal. Though eccentric and sometimes accused of being absent-minded, he maintains a strong authoritative presence, often leaving his subordinates uncertain of his intentions. He remains loyal to the Unione Corse and is known for his willingness to welcome anyone in Provence and the Unione Corse. He was the first to welcome an Outcast on Planet Marseille.
Salvatore Orsini is the nephew of Principal Alfredo Orsini and a prominent member of the Orsini family. As a no-nonsense pilot and quartermaster, Salvatore is fully dedicated to his duties, leaving no room for distractions or small talk. Born and raised on Planet Marseille, some consider him the epitome of a Corsican.
After enrolling in a Freelancer preparation school, which turned out to be a scam orchestrated by the Unione Corse, Salvatore eventually joined the organization and gained piloting experience. Although not a skilled marksman, he was assigned as the pilot of the L'Ane transport vessel "Passeur," a role he continues to fulfill to this day.
Todd Sullivan is the founder of Manhattan Spacecraft Design Bureau (MSDB), a Liberty-based company. Originally from Planet Leeds, Todd learned the craft of spacecraft repair while working alongside his father. This experience ignited his passion and talent for designing and upgrading existing vessels.
At the age of 25, he successfully sold his first modified spacecraft, a Paladin from the Bretonian Armed Forces' surplus. He eventually migrated to Liberty and gained the nationality. He opened a small repair shop on Planet New California, where he gained enough money to migrate to Manhattan and open a proper company, the Manhattan Spacecraft Design Bureau.
To Be Written
RV-Tempus.Fugit
The RV Tempus Fugit is a gunboat owned by a ruthless explorer. It serves as both a research vessel and a means of transportation in the Omicrons. The ship has undergone extensive modifications at the expense of its armor, providing only a minor upgrade compared to most gunboats.
Crewman William Hawkins - 1st|
William Hawkins is a crewman serving in the 1st Armada. He was previously an Ensign in the Forty-Sixth Fleet and was offered a position in the First Armada during its early stages. Alongside his former superiors from the Forty-Sixth, William accepted the offer. He is a relatively new pilot in the Navy, known for his kindness and generosity. However, he often feels envious of his peers due to his skills not reaching the average level.
Principal Alfredo Orsini - UC/-
Alfredo Orsini is the Principal of the Unione Corse and has been its leader since a reshuffle in the organization's hierarchy. He negotiated a deal with the Gallic Union, securing official recognition for the Unione Corse and making it a guardian alongside the Union. Previously expelled as a medical doctor due to his illicit methods of treating patients, particularly with Nox,
Alfredo joined the Unione Corse out of frustration. He utilized his medical knowledge to continue underground research on Nox within the organization and eventually rose to the position of Principal. Though eccentric and sometimes accused of being absent-minded, he maintains a strong authoritative presence, often leaving his subordinates uncertain of his intentions. He remains loyal to the Unione Corse and is known for his willingness to welcome anyone in Provence and the Unione Corse. He was the first to welcome an Outcast on Planet Marseille.
Salvatore Orsini - UC/-
Salvatore Orsini is the nephew of Principal Alfredo Orsini and a prominent member of the Orsini family. As a no-nonsense pilot and quartermaster, Salvatore is fully dedicated to his duties, leaving no room for distractions or small talk. Born and raised on Planet Marseille, some consider him the epitome of a Corsican.
After enrolling in a Freelancer preparation school, which turned out to be a scam orchestrated by the Unione Corse, Salvatore eventually joined the organization and gained piloting experience. Although not a skilled marksman, he was assigned as the pilot of the L'Ane transport vessel "Passeur," a role he continues to fulfill to this day.
Todd Sullivan - MSDB|
Todd Sullivan is the founder of Manhattan Spacecraft Design Bureau (MSDB), a Liberty-based company. Originally from Planet Leeds, Todd learned the craft of spacecraft repair while working alongside his father. This experience ignited his passion and talent for designing and upgrading existing vessels.
At the age of 25, he successfully sold his first modified spacecraft, a Paladin from the Bretonian Armed Forces' surplus. He eventually migrated to Liberty and gained the nationality. He opened a small repair shop on Planet New California, where he gained enough money to migrate to Manhattan and open a proper company, the Manhattan Spacecraft Design Bureau.
Caleb Anderson - +Cryer+
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