Emlin Gertrude when im looking at your application, it looks like you were writing it in a train during the way to work. I wont tell you that your Rheinlandish is a little bit rusty what makes some part of your bio not understanding, but the point what bothers me is that i think you are hiding something from us. I have the feeling you didnt tell us everything of your life. Please take your time and write an extended bio.
Herr Niklas.Klein, danke for your application. My condolences for your loss. I see we shouldnt have many problems in teaching you the basics of flying in a spaceship as you have studied them on the academy and even that a trainer provided you with usefull tactics. But still we need more details of your life. Why did your parents die? Did they die just so or was there a reason for their death? How is your friend called by who you live now. Who was the teacher who thought you the tactics. I could continue with questions, but i leave it up to you to provide us with more informations about you.
Herr Karl Muller, danke for your application. When i read your application, i cant loose the feeling that something is missing there. Maybe you could try to extend it with more details.