All information about us can be found in the below link feel free to critic or whatever in here about the factoin and its RP,
this is a ooRP thread and all feed back comments ect will be replied to,
please no trolling or flaming
(07-15-2016, 09:19 AM)Zyliath Wrote: Hmm...After reading, I would ask this to you:
How will you fund (inRP) the faction in all of its components (mostly R&D)?
(inRP) Currently one group Mining&trading-NZ-ltd are providing some funding in return for information gathered on pirates locations and names of known ships along with discounted tech that the R&D teams may develop of lay there hands on,
Private parties pay for some information, and aid in matters that a outside of there abilities to handle ( ZoI )
We have a small fleet of vessels -serenities and border world transports- that are used for trading and inRP cargo hauling
You may want to detail the history, add diplomacy, give more detailed goals. Concept is interesting but you may want to think more about execution of this "siriuswide freelancer intel researchers defecting rheinland" idea. It seems rather rushed and dull atm. With some polishing this can turn out to be an unique and interesting faction
moved to proper subforum, unofficial faction feedback ought to go in the unofficial factions section. Official factions get to use the Faction Feedback subforum
(07-15-2016, 09:56 AM)Wulverine Wrote: moved to proper subforum, unofficial faction feedback ought to go in the unofficial factions section. Official factions get to use the Faction Feedback subforum
(07-15-2016, 09:36 AM)TheShooter36 Wrote: You may want to detail the history, add diplomacy, give more detailed goals. Concept is interesting but you may want to think more about execution of this "siriuswide freelancer intel researchers defecting rheinland" idea. It seems rather rushed and dull atm. With some polishing this can turn out to be an unique and interesting faction
Ok thanks for that and yes your right it does need some work and a more detailed history, i will get onto that over the next day or so and again ask for feedback about it,
As for the diplomacy thats a hard one to add as it will change possible many times depending on current objectives, one day we may be fighting pirate factions and the next our transporters may be delivering goods to others such as the corsairs, outcast blood dragons ect ect, if you or anyone has ideas on a diplomacy stance we can take with this in mind im completely open to aid,