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Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Fletcher - 10-25-2008
All right I've been asked by a few people to take a look at the stories, I'm going through editing some. I'll concentrate after work tomorrow, I'm in no shape to do it tonight. Too much drink and a great memorable night in Stradey Park, last match ever.
Whatever the reason, I'll be doing it tomorrow.
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Orin - 10-25-2008
I'd love feedback on Broken Skies.
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=23814&hl=
I'm fairly certain it needs no editing, but feedback would be nice.
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Fletcher - 10-25-2008
Minions get to work:P
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Dra1003 - 10-25-2008
well i could use feed back on this http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=24026&hl=
and MAYBE this http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=25138&hl=
ive been wrighting tons of bio's lately and im working on yet another one now but i only want suggestions for that bio and the story
Note: fletcher thats awfully helpful of you :)
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Mike_Fire - 10-25-2008
Hello community of discovery.
Here is all my stories and data's link.
.Mike Fire data and story
.Rick Gunner data
.Jeff Willdor stories and data
.Prototype.cyborg-T1 data and communication channel
I'm having fun with my cyborg. Don't know what I'm doing, All he does atm is exploring.
I hope to get more encounters with that characters. To see how the players will react.
Also this char uses only the money he will make on his discovering. I only made one trade. And I'm almost out of cash.
I'll have to find a way other than trading to earn money with this CSV.
If you have time to read... All feedback is welcome...and thanks if you do...
It would help me a lot.
EDIT: I have corrected things in captain jeff data. It was a mess and very confusing. Well if you get confuse tell me coz there might be things i haven't corrected.
Also I have added pictures of the Crew.
Hehe Now i got a face for each character.:yahoo:
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Camtheman Of Freelancer4Ever - 10-25-2008
Well, Im making a BIG buy, and i dont want to be bashed for not having a good enough RP, so here it is, the finished Product.
Hugo Hirschfield.
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=25870
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Fletcher - 10-25-2008
Wah so much reading to get on with :wacko: I'll do it ASAP. I got the day off tomorrow (I hope) I;m wrecked, but I will read them! And leave feedback. For now before I go up the club, I'm going to 'evolve' one of my RP's.
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Fletcher - 10-26-2008
' Wrote:Well, if you are really bored, I'd love some opinions on my Valhalla Rising story. My feedback thread got ignored =pI told you I'd get through it! I did too! Reviewed and edited with grammar and stuff updates.
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=18024
I dont really care too much about spelling/grammar but just if the story is going ok, if it makes sense (of doesn't.. etc)
I'd appreciate it =)
That story is awesome! For those with patience. Read it. Do it now. Now I tell ya!!
EDIT: I am tired now, I want to play a game of Freelancer before I die. Oh and Men of Honor is on too. Great film.
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - MB52 - 10-26-2008
' Wrote:I told you I'd get through it! I did too! Reviewed and edited with grammar and stuff updates.
That story is awesome! For those with patience. Read it. Do it now. Now I tell ya!!
EDIT: I am tired now, I want to play a game of Freelancer before I die. Oh and Men of Honor is on too. Great film.
And I thank you greatly for the feedback it is much much appreciated. Only problem is the last PM you sent me is blank when I open it...and I can't read what you said... (I know you said something because in the "preview" pop up it showed some text, but the text disappeared when I went to the full view...)
I'm not sure what the deal is... but you may have to resend what you sent, or fill me in on it... :(
Fletcher & Co. Roleplay Help and Feedback Request Thread - Fletcher - 10-26-2008
' Wrote:And I thank you greatly for the feedback it is much much appreciated. Only problem is the last PM you sent me is blank when I open it...and I can't read what you said... (I know you said something because in the "preview" pop up it showed some text, but the text disappeared when I went to the full view...)I resent the PM, but the edit is now in a rich text document. I must have gone over the word limit in the PM. The story was around ~12,000 words long!:D
I'm not sure what the deal is... but you may have to resend what you sent, or fill me in on it... :(
Time to help some more! Only got 20 minutes before food in my Grans up the road...
EDIT: Added a list of what I need to do.