+- Discovery Gaming Community (https://discoverygc.com/forums)
+-- Forum: Discovery General (https://discoverygc.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?fid=3)
+--- Forum: Discovery RP 24/7 General Discussions (https://discoverygc.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?fid=23)
+--- Thread: Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP (/showthread.php?tid=6194)
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Boss - 02-14-2008
Nice work.
(yes I know who you are)
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Xoria - 02-15-2008
Succinct. That's good.
Amateurs try to drown the reader in a flood of metaphor and adjectives.
Piercingly succinct is....I almost suspect that you read Hemingway, but who reads Hemingway anymore?
Keep going. I'm wondering if this will turn out to be a paranormal/supernatural resurrection, or a scientific/technological one.
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - pchwang - 02-15-2008
hehe Xoria...there are some of us here that like Dickens too.;)
Everyone's writing style varies, there is no one defined style.
However, I liked it Vince!
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Vince Piccio - 02-17-2008
New post made, and changed the subtitle on both this and the RP. To show what it's all about...
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Jihadjoe - 02-17-2008
Brilliant. I love it, not seen anything this original in ages, keep it up.
' Wrote:but who reads Hemingway anymore?
I do... but I agree a very under-read author.
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Vince Piccio - 02-17-2008
Another new post. *bump*
Appreciate all feedback so far, and a note....
Dab, I'ma kill you.
Seems half the server knows who I really am....
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Jihadjoe - 02-17-2008
Another great post mate... Very nicely written, I really want to see where this is going now.
And yes... I know who you are as well.
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Dab - 02-17-2008
' Wrote:Dab, I'ma kill you.
*static*
' Wrote:Seems half the server knows who I really am....
Don't look at me on this one..
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Vince Piccio - 02-18-2008
Another new post.
Feedback on 'Fantasmas de la Nube Siniestra' RP - Vince Piccio - 02-18-2008
Another new post, and now we're about to introduce something new.