(02-12-2014, 06:33 PM)Haste Wrote: I find your lore document very.. Well, difficult to read through. Lots of screenshots of exploding things and clipping AI cruisers. I might have missed it as a I scrolled through, but is there a summary anywhere like other faction info pages often have? Neatly ordered information, history, what goals the faction is working towards, that kind of stuff. I'd like to figure out what you're trying to be, but this lore document isn't much help.

From what I've seen in-game and on the forums, you roleplay rather human-like and somewhat individualistic (which seems a big contrast with your faction name - the Consensus) AIs. I'd personally like to see more mystery, more alien traits. Explore your relations with the Nomads, perhaps? And by that I don't mean writing about how you're a race of super-machines that are the arch-nemesis of the Nomads (as if the entirety of humanity wasn't enough, y'know), but perhaps the opposite instead.

The decisions made by the faction seem like they could've just as easily been made by a small group of stranded human beings basing out of Gammu. To me, that doesn't seem like a good thing.

Whatever you do, it'll be difficult for you to become anything but an easter egg taken too seriously.