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Crystal Wind: Comments - Saigo.Watanabe - 09-27-2008
this is in rp, them 2 instances are not:
Anyway back to my story plz:P
Crystal Wind: Comments - Orin - 09-27-2008
I think the "fear of death" line sounds weird. She sacrificed herself in the first chapter... doesn't really fit.
Crystal Wind: Comments - Saigo.Watanabe - 09-28-2008
i might change that, but the point it she felt that strongly with protecting the nomads
Crystal Wind: Comments - Tinky57 - 09-28-2008
This is a nice story, although i found it hard to tell if CrystalWind was male or female (not that it mattered). It is a very nice length as well. I hate reading long story's on a computer screen but this is a good length.
Crystal Wind: Comments - Saigo.Watanabe - 09-28-2008
Quote:That day, it sealed her fate...CrystalWind is a women.
Crystal Wind: Comments - Jihadjoe - 09-28-2008
' Wrote:well, all of us except:
-The traders that would rather be blown up than pay tax
-The people who suicide after a fight to avoid repair bills
Infact tenacity, not everyone does fear the idea of death. Doesn't mean those people won't avoid it though, after all... life is kinda fun..
And anyway, I think I fear the pain that closely preceeds death more than death itself...
Crystal Wind: Comments - Saigo.Watanabe - 10-04-2008
new part of the story up
Constructive Criticism and praise only.