' Wrote:Maybe add "Camping" on the list too?

' Wrote:Just a acouple of clarifications, the GC are a player faction, and the LR no longer have square brackets after their name. The LH also do not have square brackets.

Also

[QCR] it either means Queen Carina's Regulars, or Queen Carina's Regiment I have no idea which, I'm a member of the QCO we don't deal much with the common folk.

LPI Liberty Police Incorporated a player faction of fat, lazy, donut munching, coffee swilling incompetents. (You got the other two Police factions on there, this a blatant case of favouritism I tell you!)

' Wrote:

The bat is out just in case I need it. :D

Firstly, would suggest you do away with using the FL abbreviation before you've defined it. Ideally a post clarifying abbreviations should not use those abbrevaitions except when clarifying.

Alterations

codies, can only be bought from Armouries.

GC, Golden Chrysanthemums, not Gloden Chrysanthemus

KoS, Kill on sight. the past tense would be KoS'ed

ooc/OOC, missed a few letters in roleplaying it says "not roplaying his/her part in server"

Traditionally PC and NPC mean Player Character and Non Player Character, but you're current definitions fit well

rep, Indicator should be changed to Indicates

Rep fixing, "means making the reputation to align with current character/faction" remove the word "to"

Shield Camping, "you continue with attack" should become "you continue with the attack"

Additions

LH Lane Hackers, whilst it is the player faction it should be added as it's used to define Lane Hacker NPCs

LPI, Liberty Police Incorporated. Again it's a used acronym for the police NPCs within Liberty, especially New York
Okay the bat wasn't needed, this is not me attempting to belittle your work just an attempt to iron out any wrinkles. Hope this helps.