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RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Remnant - 07-23-2014
I'd think it would be a common courtesy to give some 'constructive criticism' to someone else who is attempting to work on a faction of their own. Not outright stating that it's horrible, without any advice on how to improve it.
Don't let me see any more posts without any general purpose than to degrade someone else, you'll be receiving a PM from me if you do.
Help a man out, be a constructive community. If you think it's a bad idea? Suggest a change.
Don't let me see any more posts without any general purpose than to degrade someone else, you'll be receiving a PM from me if you do.
Help a man out, be a constructive community. If you think it's a bad idea? Suggest a change.
RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Pinko - 07-23-2014
(07-23-2014, 08:44 AM)Moveit56 Wrote:I'd think it would be a common courtesy to give some 'constructive criticism' to someone else who is attempting to work on a faction of their own. Not outright stating that it's horrible, without any advice on how to improve it.
Don't let me see any more posts without any general purpose than to degrade someone else, you'll be receiving a PM from me if you do.
Help a man out, be a constructive community. If you think it's a bad idea? Suggest a change.
There's 4 pages of people trying to give tips on how he can change and improve on his ideas, with the player only shutting his eyes and covering his ears at any kind of criticism that is given to him. At one point, you have to go down and explain the root of the issues.
I'm even volunteering to join his group to help him out and help him improve. In fact, I'll write an application right now, no matter how horrible I'll feel afterwards.
RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Alhimik - 07-23-2014
First of all - Write more information about faction...
Next step - Some imagines
Final step - Delete all this...
~Alhimik
RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Huursa - 07-23-2014
(07-23-2014, 08:44 AM)Alhimik Wrote:I know cashew .. and Alhimik no image cuz i cant make logo also its not my problem that is boring for youQuote:The year is 2200C.E Alliance is losing the war 5 Sleeper ships are ready to go in the sirius sector and break the coalition blockade . But before the departure some pilots from all sleeper ships decide do eject because they want to explore Pegasus sector and after the ejection they went in the Pegasus sector. After long years of traveling throught the universe they arrived .Its 1 P.S(Pegasus Settlement) after searching for hapitable planet they found it and called it New Earth there they estabilished Pegasus Republic and made government , after centuries of building cities,exploring and colonisation of the Pegasus Sector the year 821 P.S became a routine fleet of colonizing ships are ready to jumpdrive in uncharted system but they typed wrong jump drive coordinates and arrived in Omega's now they are trying to colonize the omega sector and estabilish the Pegasus Republic .
1) Pegasus - not are sector, this is Galaxy...
2) One more sleeping ship - this is very boring...
3)Very short history - +1 to boring...
4)Without imagine - +5 to boring...
RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Sabru - 07-23-2014
(07-23-2014, 08:26 AM)xManBG Wrote: Look Ponge i dont want to join any factions, i want to be part of RPP ...
(07-23-2014, 08:37 AM)xManBG Wrote: Ok i cant join other factions
theres a big difference between "can't" and "don't want to". If you have trouble with writing bios, just ask. plenty of people will be happy to help.
if you just want to do your own thing, this community might not be the best then.
RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Huursa - 07-23-2014
(07-23-2014, 08:55 AM)Sabre Wrote:(07-23-2014, 08:26 AM)xManBG Wrote: Look Ponge i dont want to join any factions, i want to be part of RPP ...
(07-23-2014, 08:37 AM)xManBG Wrote: Ok i cant join other factions
theres a big difference between "can't" and "don't want to". If you have trouble with writing bios, just ask. plenty of people will be happy to help.
if you just want to do your own thing, this community might not be the best then.
Plenty of people?Who?
RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Connor - 07-23-2014
Almost everybody in this thread has provided some sort of feedback that'll help you. You just seem to throw it back into everyone. I really suggest that you reread this thread and take not of the feedback given.
RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Singularity - 07-23-2014
Well, my advice would be to first make a lore .. and yes, it should be good if you add something different; a different story concept or a different approach overall.
May be see how adding a different, non-vanilla group is done. Then probably an extensive lore has to be written.
Anyways, it would have been better if you had asked the community suggestion first and then started working on it after amassing the ideas all together, instead of posting an Unofficial faction without a lore.
You can still do it, with proper way. Just to say that, do listen to some advices, the community gives. Those are helpful
RE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Ponge - 07-23-2014
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Please ignore due to the reworkRE: Revolutionary Pegasus Piligrims - Cashew - 07-23-2014
Myself, Wulverine and Pinko are helping xmanBG to define his faction etc etc. So pretty much everything is changing and I have to say the ideas are pretty cool. So sit tight and hold your questions etc for when the 'new' history, name, lore, diplomacy comes out.