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thisDerius Friendly RP Feedback - thisDerius - 12-04-2015
Hello. As I have decided to return to Discovery, I have also decided to boot up my old characters and make a big, general update on pretty much everything.
You can check everything here:
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Scarlet Marie SharpI was mainly expanding the stories and ran through some grammar checks.
As always, constructive criticizm is welcome.
You can always find me in space and I am always willing to RP.
RE: Darius Friendly Feedback - thisDerius - 03-21-2016
Bump! small edit. Link changed.
RE: Darius Friendly Feedback - thisDerius - 08-22-2016
We are still alive here. Feel free to check it out.
RE: Darius Friendly Feedback - thisDerius - 10-28-2016
BUMP!
List updated.
RE: Darius Friendly Feedback - thisDerius - 12-10-2016
A wild bump appeared.
RE: Darius Friendly Feedback - thisDerius - 02-26-2017
Bumperious rex. I have removed something and added The Blackguard info.
RE: Darius Friendly Feedback - thisDerius - 02-15-2025
Full update completed. Feel free to check it out.
RE: Darius Friendly Feedback - Lolipop12 - 02-16-2025
Looks awesome overall, especially Man or Machine. The bbcode format is well made.
RE: thisDerius Friendly RP Feedback - thisDerius - 02-22-2025
Update: A new entry into my RP. Opened up an old story and decided to rewrite it a bit. Expanded and detailed. It takes place before I placed John Derius Guerra into active roleplay.
Edit: Updated the font on "The Hunters". Much more readable now.
RE: thisDerius Friendly RP Feedback - thisDerius - 03-21-2025
Update: I have compensated the stories to match with the time-skip that has happened while I was away. (I learned about it today)
The Hunters story is nearing its end (Around 2 more chapters before the end. Next one will be posted soon and the last 2 will be posted after critical RP has been completed)