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Morphed logs: Kes'Reena - Operator - 02-15-2016

This thread contains logs of Kes'Reena, a newcomer in the Nomad community.

So this is not very, but a first documented nomRP with a human being. And looks like i had a jackpot - starring Sapphire Raven.


Feedback is allowed to only participated persones and morph share supervisors: @"Snoopy", @HuggieSunrise, @Nosferath and @"Void_Nemesis"
Participated persones: Me, @"Nyx"


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Operator - 02-16-2016

The second day was... Interesting. I'd finaly got my Trial ID and was able to fly everywhere and that possibility was used as well.
But this is my first incounter for today - Delta chat.
And then i flought away to The Shrine and met these two interesting BHG indies on my road.

Feedback is allowed to only participated persones and morph share supervisors: @"Snoopy", @HuggieSunrise, @Nosferath and @"Void_Nemesis"
Participated persones: Me, @"Snoopy", @Foxglove, @Pacific


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Connor - 02-16-2016

You've taken the feedback I've given to you in skype and worked on it very well. Your structure is far better and the use of longer sentences is helping you a lot there. I don't really have much to add, keep it up. The only thing I will say is that you should clean your logs out of any group chat so that we only see InRP stuff as it can make the logs a little bit hard to follow.


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Nosferath - 02-16-2016

Not bad, however, there are some aspects that could be improved:
-Using the word1/word2 is nice and useful, however, try not to overuse it. Using word1/word2/word3 is, in my oppinion, overdoing it.
-Nomad speech does not prevent you from using connectors. Don't be afraid of saying "ours be harmless" or even "ours are harmless", instead of "ours harmless".
-It is nicer to describe factions rather than naming them. Just as an example, you could call The Order "Lightleast", "Spawn~of~Toledo", "Lightsucker", etc.


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Operator - 02-17-2016

Day #3
I tried to accomplish @Nosferath's mission, but due to few bialogical problems, i couldn't. From now on, i have these logs and screen shots from my Lolberty adventure.

Feedback is allowed to only participated persones and morph share supervisors: @"Snoopy", @HuggieSunrise, @Nosferath and @"Void_Nemesis"


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Operator - 02-18-2016

Day #4
It's started to give me some pleasure. I've been in Delta and was interacting a lot of players. Here some logs.

Feedback is allowed to only participated persones and morph share supervisors: @"Snoopy", @HuggieSunrise, @Nosferath and @"Void_Nemesis"
Participated persones: Me, @"Captain_Nemo"


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Operator - 02-19-2016

Day #5
Finaly managed to accomplish @Nosferath's mission! Here goes the logs and couple of screen shots.

Feedback is allowed to only participated persones and morph share supervisors: @"Snoopy", @HuggieSunrise, @Nosferath and @"Void_Nemesis"


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Operator - 02-21-2016

Day #7
Just roleplayed with LNSs and LSF agent. As always, screen shots and logs.

Feedback is allowed to only participated persones and morph share supervisors: @"Snoopy", @HuggieSunrise, @Nosferath and @"Void_Nemesis"
Participated persones: Me, @CrazyD


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Operator - 02-23-2016

Day #9
I've been in Cali and had a nice chat with some folks. yesterday

Feedback is allowed to only participated persones and morph share supervisors: @"Snoopy" , @HuggieSunrise , @Nosferath and @"Void_Nemesis"


RE: Logs of Kes'Reena - Operator - 02-26-2016

Day #... ffs, i've already missed a count

Was in NY for today and met this typical liberty na'vi pilot. Logs only.


Feedback is allowed to only participated persones and morph share supervisors: @"Snoopy" , @HuggieSunrise , @Nosferath and @"Void_Nemesis"