Morph logs: Ely'on - Mr.Badger - 04-19-2016
Long time ago that I flew a Morph, anyway, here are my logs.
Feel free to give me hints and so on.
[19.04.2016 15:27:06] Mr.Yoshida.: Keep moving.
[19.04.2016 15:32:19] Ely'on: *...('warmth')...*
[19.04.2016 15:33:19] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:We are reading a Nomad Morph on scanners. Do not engage.
[19.04.2016 15:33:24] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Let's wait him out.
[19.04.2016 15:33:47] Ely'on: *...'Yours' doing ~here~...*
[19.04.2016 15:34:51] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:What are you doing here
[19.04.2016 15:35:00] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: I don't like this
[19.04.2016 15:35:06] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Stay close.
[19.04.2016 15:35:20] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: With pleasure, sir.
[19.04.2016 15:35:33] Ely'on: *...'Ours' learning ~drakelings~...*
[19.04.2016 15:36:08] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Under fire!
[19.04.2016 15:37:09] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Permission to engage?
[19.04.2016 15:37:20] Ely'on: *...'Ours' don't ~allow~ to ~run~...*
[19.04.2016 15:38:09] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Sir...
[19.04.2016 15:38:11] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Negative, do not engage, it is not a threat.
[19.04.2016 15:38:25] Ely'on: *...'Ours' ~learns~ 'drakelings'...*
[19.04.2016 15:38:28] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:We proceed ahead. You should see our destination in the distance.
[19.04.2016 15:38:38] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Missile.
[19.04.2016 15:38:54] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:It only disruptored our engines for a short period of time.
[19.04.2016 15:39:01] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:We continue on cruise speed.
[19.04.2016 15:39:04] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Tch-!
[19.04.2016 15:39:25] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: What do you want...whatever you are?!
[19.04.2016 15:39:37] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:That is a Nomad Morph. All they do is try and learn.
[19.04.2016 15:39:47] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:But it does not seem to me trying to communicate much.
[19.04.2016 15:40:23] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Crap!
[19.04.2016 15:40:30] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Just ignore him Ensign Reeves.
[19.04.2016 15:40:42] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: *takes a few breaths*
[19.04.2016 15:40:46] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Wilco.
[19.04.2016 15:41:13] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Try and get a few images and report him to the authority. Just so they are aware that there is a Nomad lurking the secto.
[19.04.2016 15:41:17] LNS-Roosevelt: // sector*
[19.04.2016 15:41:18] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: The weapons platforms are aiming at me.
[19.04.2016 15:41:27] Ely'on: *...'Ours' not (pleased) ...*
[19.04.2016 15:41:38] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Ours?
[19.04.2016 15:42:12] Ely'on: *...(anger)...*
[19.04.2016 15:42:19] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: He doesn't sound happy...
[19.04.2016 15:42:35] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:The Nomad is unable to touch us.
[19.04.2016 15:42:48] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: He's done more than touch us with his missiles.
[19.04.2016 15:42:56] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: I think my butt is sore from the impacts...
[19.04.2016 15:42:57] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Is the Battleship ahead and Station seeing you as hostile?
[19.04.2016 15:43:03] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Yes.
[19.04.2016 15:43:06] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: All red on scans.
[19.04.2016 15:43:33] Ely'on: ***For a short moment, you can see a female in front of your ship***
[19.04.2016 15:43:43] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: He's...inside my head...
[19.04.2016 15:43:54] Ely'on: ***The female smiles at you***
[19.04.2016 15:44:30] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: I'm fine, dock if you need to
[19.04.2016 15:44:59] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Tell me, nomad. Do you like sunbucks?
[19.04.2016 15:45:15] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: You could probably learn to bake.
[19.04.2016 15:45:24] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Study theatrics.
[19.04.2016 15:45:25] Ely'on: *...'Ours' don't ~know~ Sunbucks...*
[19.04.2016 15:45:33] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: That's terrible.
[19.04.2016 15:45:36] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: No wonder you're so mad.
[19.04.2016 15:45:57] Ely'on: ***The female disappears***
[19.04.2016 15:46:09] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: What's wrong? Illusion didn't work?
[19.04.2016 15:46:43] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: What do you want with us?
[19.04.2016 15:47:12] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Another...
[19.04.2016 15:47:13] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Oh boy.
[19.04.2016 15:47:18] Ely'on: *...'Ours' not ~alone~...*
[19.04.2016 15:47:30] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Yours...whatever isn't supposed to be hostile, right?
[19.04.2016 15:47:37] 2016-04-19 13:48:53 SMT Traffic control alert: LNS-Roosevelt has requested to dock
[19.04.2016 15:47:55] Enlil: *...'ours' -voidling- ('warmth')...*
[19.04.2016 15:48:04] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Voidling?
[19.04.2016 15:48:09] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: You're...kids?
[19.04.2016 15:48:16] Ely'on: ('warmth')
[19.04.2016 15:48:23] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Does warmth mean yes?
[19.04.2016 15:48:33] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Or is that a mating call and that's why the other one is here?
[19.04.2016 15:48:35] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Ensign, they are just babies. Just leave them be.
[19.04.2016 15:48:45] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: They're creeping me the hell out, sir.
[19.04.2016 15:49:11] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Just stay close. We will return to Planet Wight now.
[19.04.2016 15:49:24] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Forming up on you.
[19.04.2016 15:49:52] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: If you can't harm us, you have no right to stop us from going away.
[19.04.2016 15:49:55] Enlil: *...'ours' have /persece/ ('hostility') 'darklings'...*
[19.04.2016 15:50:21] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: A-...Anger. For what?
[19.04.2016 15:50:57] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: We're not going to hurt you, just let us go.
[19.04.2016 15:51:06] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Again Reeves, just ignore them, they are harmless.
[19.04.2016 15:51:21] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: I can't help but feel like we're only alive because they're letting us.
[19.04.2016 15:51:40] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:We are letting them.
[19.04.2016 15:51:46] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:No need to be afraid.
[19.04.2016 15:51:49] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: R-right.
[19.04.2016 15:51:51] Ely'on: *...'Yours' ~ignore~...*
[19.04.2016 15:52:05] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:That is a good idea Nomads. Go return to mummy.
[19.04.2016 15:52:19] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Check your fire there Nomad.
[19.04.2016 15:52:29] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: This engine was expensive, alright?
[19.04.2016 15:52:38] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:They probably don't know what that means.
[19.04.2016 15:52:46] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: You're probably right.
[19.04.2016 15:52:50] Enlil: *...'curiosity'...*
[19.04.2016 15:52:58] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Just stupid, dumb, aliens.
[19.04.2016 15:53:15] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: That's a compliment in Human, nomads. Don't you worry!
[19.04.2016 15:53:22] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: *laughs nervously*
[19.04.2016 15:53:25] Ely'on: *...('Anger')...*
[19.04.2016 15:53:32] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Oh...boy...
[19.04.2016 15:53:57] Enlil: *...'ours' -understand- 'darklings'...*
[19.04.2016 15:53:59] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Again, they probably don't know what a compliment is either.
[19.04.2016 15:54:15] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:They seem to understand alot for such young Nomads.
[19.04.2016 15:54:18] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: They're like...pure energy.
[19.04.2016 15:54:48] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Why are they helping us?
[19.04.2016 15:54:57] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Yet calling us darklings.
[19.04.2016 15:55:04] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: I haven't done anything wrong in my life...
[19.04.2016 15:55:17] Enlil: *...'ours' -learns' 'darklings'...*
[19.04.2016 15:55:17] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Ensign, you sound like the devil is upon you.
[19.04.2016 15:55:37] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: I wasn't trained for this!
[19.04.2016 15:55:42] Enlil: *...('warmth')...*
[19.04.2016 15:55:46] Ely'on: ***You can see again this female in front of your ship***
[19.04.2016 15:55:58] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Not many people are.
[19.04.2016 15:56:02] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Why is there a lady in front of my ship?
[19.04.2016 15:56:07] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Did someone eject?
[19.04.2016 15:56:13] Ely'on: ***The female doesn't look really happy, she is turning away from you***
[19.04.2016 15:56:20] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: W-...Wait!
[19.04.2016 15:56:55] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: This is the longest RTB in my life.
[19.04.2016 15:56:58] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Just for the record!
[19.04.2016 15:57:11] Enlil: *...'ours' -disappoint- 'darklings'...*
[19.04.2016 15:57:27] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: We don't know what you want.
[19.04.2016 15:57:30] Ely'on: ***She looks again at you, she starts to crys***
[19.04.2016 15:57:30] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: We can't help you.
[19.04.2016 15:57:44] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Yes we are dissapointed in you also Nomads.
[19.04.2016 15:57:53] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Yeah! We coulda' been friends.
[19.04.2016 15:57:57] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Gone to sunbucks together.
[19.04.2016 15:58:01] Enlil: *...('anger')...*
[19.04.2016 15:58:20] Ely'on: *** The female starts to punch her self***
[19.04.2016 15:58:31] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: What- Why are you doing that?
[19.04.2016 15:58:51] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Is this showing up on your scans, sir?
[19.04.2016 15:59:01] Ely'on: ***She starts to smile... she is running towards you***
[19.04.2016 15:59:08] Enlil: *...'ours 'learn' 'house-keepers'...*
[19.04.2016 15:59:22] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Yes, we're house keepers.
[19.04.2016 15:59:24] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:You want to learn by being angry? That is not a clever way is it.
[19.04.2016 15:59:27] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: We defend the innocent.
[19.04.2016 15:59:36] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Protect the helpless.
[19.04.2016 15:59:48] Ely'on: *** She runs through your body, you starts to feel empty***
[19.04.2016 15:59:57] Enlil: *...'yours' ~defend~ -innocent-...*
[19.04.2016 16:00:04] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: That's right.
[19.04.2016 16:00:11] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: We're not 'darklings'.
[19.04.2016 16:00:18] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:We are "Humans"
[19.04.2016 16:00:30] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: The less stupid and evil kind of humans.
[19.04.2016 16:00:32] Enlil: *...'ours' ~calls~ 'yours' -darklings-...*
[19.04.2016 16:00:40] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Not all of us are bad.
[19.04.2016 16:00:45] Ely'on: ***The female disappears behind your body***
[19.04.2016 16:01:13] Enlil: *...'ours' ~voidlings~ 'yours' -darklings-...*
[19.04.2016 16:01:30] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: What void?
[19.04.2016 16:01:39] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:We are just avoiding some annoying, pesky, Nomad Morph. Who thinks guns solve everything by being angry.
[19.04.2016 16:01:57] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: They didn't hurt us, we just didn't do what they wanted and got mad.
[19.04.2016 16:02:03] Enlil: *...'yours' ~calls~ 'ours' -nomad- 'voidlings'...*
[19.04.2016 16:02:19] Death: Ascabas was put out of action by a hostile vessel.
[19.04.2016 16:02:25] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: If you call us Humans, we'll call your voidlings.
[19.04.2016 16:02:29] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: How does that sound?
[19.04.2016 16:02:55] Ely'on: *...'Humans'...*
[19.04.2016 16:03:00] Enlil: *...'ours' /merge/ -void-...*
[19.04.2016 16:03:04] LNS-Roosevelt: Chris:Good Nomad, run away to mummy.
[19.04.2016 16:03:08] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Merge?
[19.04.2016 16:03:10] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: What do you mean?
[19.04.2016 16:03:52] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: I think they...killed one.
[19.04.2016 16:05:16] Ely'on: *...'Ours' ~learned~ words...*
[19.04.2016 16:05:50] [LN]-Avery.Reeves: Okay..?
RE: Morph logs: Ely'on - Mr.Badger - 04-19-2016
I was on my GB, and decided to mindshare again, maybe you can give me also some hints and feebdack 
[19.04.2016 20:40:13] Ion'rada: *...'Yours' ~invade~ 'Ours' system...*
[19.04.2016 20:40:47] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: *lights a cigarette* "niet... the offer to co-exist is there. You refuse to take it."
[19.04.2016 20:41:08] Ion'rada: ('Anger')
[19.04.2016 20:41:31] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: *twirls her finger and taps her head to her tactical officer* "You may display all the anger you like...
[19.04.2016 20:41:46] SCRA|Pyl'nist': your choices do not serve to impose a favourable impression of your kind."
[19.04.2016 20:42:19] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: "The option to stand down from these proceedings is always present, alien creature." *smokes*
[19.04.2016 20:42:22] Ion'rada: ***You can see a female right in front of you, she is smiling towards you, in the right hand she holds a knife***
[19.04.2016 20:42:42] Ion'rada: *...'Ours' ~confuse~ 'Yours'...*
[19.04.2016 20:43:12] Ion'rada: ***The female is moving slowly towards you***
[19.04.2016 20:43:24] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: *grins slightly* "yours...can try." *rubbing her forehead, she takes a gun out and points it infront of her"
[19.04.2016 20:44:18] Ion'rada: ***The female starts to run towards you, pointing the knife at you, looks like she tries to kill you!***
[19.04.2016 20:44:57] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: *closing her eyes, she holsters her gun and stands firm* "Your kind is not unfamiliar to me, alien."
[19.04.2016 20:45:38] Ion'rada: ***You can feel how a sharp object hits your torso***
[19.04.2016 20:46:16] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: *grimacing, kneeling down as if a sharp pain had hit her - a comrade takes his gun out and points it -
[19.04.2016 20:46:22] SCRA|Pyl'nist': to her head.*
[19.04.2016 20:46:54] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: "If I... may enquire..., why are you... pursuing this course?"
[19.04.2016 20:47:20] Ion'rada: ***The female starts to whisper: "Press the trigger, do it!"***
[19.04.2016 20:48:09] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: *looks to her comrade and shakes her head. He nods back, albeit hesitantly.* "I trust... my crew, alien..."
[19.04.2016 20:48:52] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: "Only...when all is lost...will they carry out Initiate 62."
[19.04.2016 20:49:02] SCRA|Pyl'nist': //*initiative
[19.04.2016 20:49:42] Ion'rada: ***The female looks at your comrade, he takes her knife and knocks it in the throat from your comrade***
[19.04.2016 20:50:16] Ion'rada: ***You can see how fast your comrade is losing his blood***
[19.04.2016 20:50:33] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: *he doubles backwardss, dropping the gun and clutching at his throat. Her eyes grow wide* "... we -
[19.04.2016 20:51:14] SCRA|Pyl'nist': did not...think you cou..." *she gathers herself* "Stop...this bloodshed, there is no need."
[19.04.2016 20:51:58] Ion'rada: ***The female instandly disappears after you see the uncloaked Nomad Vessel***
[19.04.2016 20:52:29] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: *she stands up, rushing to her deceased comrade. Frowning deeply, she signals to her -
[19.04.2016 20:52:32] SCRA|Pyl'nist': tactical officer*
[19.04.2016 20:52:52] Ion'rada: *...'Ours' ~plays~ with 'Yours' mind...('giggles')...*
[19.04.2016 20:52:58] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: "This is why your kind are treated as such."
[19.04.2016 20:53:18] Ion'rada: *...('Anger')...*
[19.04.2016 20:53:36] Ion'rada: *...'Yours' ~die~ here...*
[19.04.2016 20:53:43] SCRA|Pyl'nist': Pimakhova: "Very well... but so shall yours."
RE: Morph logs: Ely'on - Operator - 04-19-2016
Not bad. Not bad at all.
Here's some hints.
1st. Try to use more constructed sentences, not just like 3-4 words in it.
2nd. Nomads can't hide their emotions, so use them in () like in every single sentence.
3rd. Try to use more "word/synonym" combinations, but not more than one in every sentence.
4ty. Try to use more mysterious words, like "Voids" instead of "Systems".
Here's a few examples.
*...'Yours' ~invade- 'Ours' system...* -> ***...'Yours' ~intrude~ 'Ours' |Void| (discord)...***
*...'Ours' ~plays~ with 'Yours' mind...('giggles')...* -> ***...'Ours' (joy) ~misting/dispeling~ 'Yours' consciousness...***
*...'Yours' ~die~ here...* -> ***...'Yours' shall be -purified/exterminated- "immediately" (anger)...***
Keep it up, I'm sure you have a great potential!
RE: Morph logs: Ely'on - Mr.Badger - 04-20-2016
(04-19-2016, 08:25 PM)Operator SmileWhileAlive Wrote: Not bad. Not bad at all.
Here's some hints.
1st. Try to use more constructed sentences, not just like 3-4 words in it.
2nd. Nomads can't hide their emotions, so use them in () like in every single sentence.
3rd. Try to use more "word/synonym" combinations, but not more than one in every sentence.
4ty. Try to use more mysterious words, like "Voids" instead of "Systems".
Here's a few examples.
*...'Yours' ~invade- 'Ours' system...* -> ***...'Yours' ~intrude~ 'Ours' |Void| (discord)...***
*...'Ours' ~plays~ with 'Yours' mind...('giggles')...* -> ***...'Ours' (joy) ~misting/dispeling~ 'Yours' consciousness...***
*...'Yours' ~die~ here...* -> ***...'Yours' shall be -purified/exterminated- "immediately" (anger)...***
Keep it up, I'm sure you have a great potential!
Thanks for the feedback and this hints
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