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[RA] Red Army - FreefighteR - 12-18-2008

[Image: rabo4.png]

Now its time to let you know who we are.

The begining of the RedArmy is on the lawfull side. We were a part of the Elite Airforce Fighters, acting in the name of Military. We accoplished the commands without asking, doing missions with the thought we help so our state and keep it assured for the people.
But someday after a mission, in what I didnt see anything dangerous for our state, I noticed that our government isnt acting for that what I beleave, and I wasnt the one, who thought so. So we started to search informations. We wanted to know what are the reasons of the government.
After years long searching we finaly we found them, we werent proud anymore about that we did in the past.
The reasons arent that what everywant think to know.
Of course our superiors were told that we became dangerous for our state, they started to hunt us.
Now we were a small group of former Elite fighters, a former proudness of Air Force, hunted by our own state.
We didnt think about to give up, so we created our own squad, called it RedArmy, and started to act in our interests in undergrounds.

At the moment we are based at the planet Malta. All Informations about our members are secret, like their past history. If someone want to become one of our squad, sure he can try it, but at the moment we are instructing 2 new fighters, so the chancce that you will be taken is pretty small.

Thank you for the time.

Regards

Freefighter


[RA] Red Army - SevereTrinity - 12-18-2008

I could type for ages.... But I'mma make this short.


IFF/ID?

Diplomacy?

<strike>And you call yourselves elite, yet you use bombers with full missiles?</strike>

Roleplay? (All I see is smilies in chat)

Shiplist?

What state did you flee from? Rheinland? Liberty? Kusari? Bretonia?

Who are your members?

Rank List?

Do you use caps or not?

What are you bringing to this server that no other faction has not already?


Answer those and I may give my vote.


EDIT: Ignore the bomber part, that's me being an ass, I don't like people calling themselves elite because I'm an idiot. You can be inRP elite, why I give a crap about that I'll never know, but ignore that part.

[RA] Red Army - looqas - 12-18-2008

Pretty vague over there.

Could you answer couple of questions?

What state?
What is you ID and affiliation (tag)?

Defining your own rebel group separated from some state is not going to end too well.


Let me give you an example what I mean.

We used be Elite Fighter Force pilot in the Kusari Naval Forces... we had to take refuge among the Outcasts and continue to fight against the Naval Forces...


If you are making up imaginary states and military forces that do not exist in Disco it is not going to work too well.


An Example how to do this kind of introduction of a new squad correctly http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=20841

[RA] Red Army - SevereTrinity - 12-18-2008

Also, when you come here, try and stay a bit, learn what you are trying to intergrate with, and try to learn about our community.

You have one post and joined yesterday, maybe invest a bit more time and effort into this before coming up with a faction.

[RA] Red Army - Unseelie - 12-18-2008

' Wrote:[Image: rabo4.png]

Now its time to let you know who we are.

The begining of the RedArmy is on the lawfull side. We were a part of the Elite Airforce Fighters, acting in the name of Military. We accoplished the commands without asking, doing missions with the thought we help so our state and keep it assured for the people.
Which government? Every base has laws, for all I know, you could have been xeno station police, or phantom station guards. Airforce...this is a space game. Spacefighters. Elite...thats really rather debatable.
Quote:But someday after a mission, in what I didnt see anything dangerous for our state, I noticed that our government isnt acting for that what I beleave, and I wasnt the one, who thought so.
Those statments contradict one another
Quote:So we started to search informations. We wanted to know what are the reasons of the government.
After years long searching we finaly we found them, we werent proud anymore about that we did in the past.
The reasons arent that what everywant think to know.
Of course our superiors were told that we became dangerous for our state, they started to hunt us.
Now we were a small group of former Elite fighters, a former proudness of Air Force, hunted by our own state.
We didnt think about to give up, so we created our own squad, called it RedArmy, and started to act in our interests in undergrounds.
Airforce again..uhm, we already have a Red Army, the Red hessians, and we have the SCRA, revolutionary army. Moreover, you're a fleet, not an army.

Quote:At the moment we are based at the planet Malta. All Informations about our members are secret, like their past history. If someone want to become one of our squad, sure he can try it, but at the moment we are instructing 2 new fighters, so the chancce that you will be taken is pretty small.

Thank you for the time.

Regards

Freefighter

Information is secret? Whatever are you hiding for?


[RA] Red Army - alpha3 - 12-18-2008

' Wrote:acting in the name of Military.

I think they have Military ID. :P

[RA] Red Army - cmfalconer - 12-18-2008

Wow, this one takes this week's "I can't believe it's posted" award.

You joined 13 hours ago? Your first post is a "faction" proposal, albeit a laughable one at best? I can haz fakshun 2?

"Red Army"? The only Red Army in Sirius is the SCRA. Maybe we'll throw a wave to the Hessians in acknowledgment.

Elite Airforce Fighters? I'm laughing too hard to respond. I will ask what an air force is doing in SPACE.

Your state. Missions without ask. What? Who? Where?

Couldn't have been too long a year, you're still wet-behind-the-ears. What did you do that you weren't proud of?

You're based on Malta. Are you Outcast? or just outcast? and yes, that's a small play-on-words.

Secret huh? looks like it with the amount of real information in your "faction proposal".

Here's a bit of advice.

-Be around for more than 1/2 a day before you can haz fakshun.
-Run Spellcheck before posting. I don't care about grammar as you may not be from an English-speaking country, but at least spell things right.
-Read any (preferably all) of THESE POSTS to familiarize yourself better with what a faction truly is.
-Read This Notice for one set of faction-creation rules
-Read This template to show what you really need in a REAL faction proposal.
-Read THE RULES before you do anything around here.

Now, don't anyone say 'this isn't a proposal, just an introduction'. That's crap and you know it. anything written like this tries to skirt the 500m rule by creating an unofficial faction first that doesn't follow official faction rules.

$1...because two cents wouldn't cut it here.

[RA] Red Army - Sarawr!? - 12-18-2008

Mmnh...I will try not to be too mean.

But I will say this, Since you're new to Disco, You ought to have done research on factions currently existing before attempting to create one of your own, especially if yours is to have a similar name or goal as a pre-existing faction.

And like the others said, a faction proposal needs to be a considerable bit more detailed with info such as where you came from and all those things.

I'd suggest waiting and submitting this again at a later date when you are better prepared...

Oh, and, Welcome to Disco.

[RA] Red Army - GhostFace - 12-18-2008

All I can say is that your information is very vague. Please list us what Severe Trinity mentioned.

[RA] Red Army - Tenacity - 12-18-2008

Oy, I was gonna use RA for my unioner group in 4.85! =P

Of course, I was going to call it Roter Anarchie, not red army.