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Yann Blackwings Captain's Logs |Feedback| - Val - 06-12-2018
This the logs of the Captain Blackwings. You can find there all the major adventures of this character in Disco.
Comments are welcome! And good reading.
Captain's Logs
RE: Yann Blackwings Captain's Logs |Feedback| - Val - 06-14-2018
Updated!
RE: Yann Blackwings Captain's Logs |Feedback| - Val - 06-15-2018
New update.
RE: Yann Blackwings Captain's Logs |Feedback| - Val - 07-26-2018
Updated
RE: Yann Blackwings Captain's Logs |Feedback| - E X O D I T E - 08-04-2018
The Google Translate is strong with this one. Not that there's anything bad about that, it's just phraseology that no native English speaker will use.
Skorak, Tails, and Co. are pretty chill and will probably help you proofread if you ask. Or if they won't, I will.
RE: Yann Blackwings Captain's Logs |Feedback| - Val - 08-04-2018
Thanks for your comments, I take note of that. However I don’t use Google Translate but as I’m not a native English speaker, the phraseology could be indeed different and sorry if this can be seen easily.