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KF| - Kriegsflotte Freya | Feedback - Kriegsflotte Freya - 04-23-2019 FEEDBACK Bloody post it. Quick Clarifications: Yes, it's an RM faction. No, unlike 3rd| it has zero intention of going for officialdom (and failing at it). It's absolutely for RP purposes and making things neat and tidy, even if the info page may just be a recolored copy of the 3rd Fleet info page. This faction is purely to give the Freya and her fleet a stable foundation, solid background and a way to latch onto anything that may happen in the future, like more conflict with the GMG/KNF or things that happen inside Rheinland house space. If anyone wants to join in on the idea, feel free to PM me on discord (Spectre#1624), or PM me on the forums ( @Spectre ). Cheers. Hoping to make this a pretty interesting side-project. RE: KF| - Kriegsflotte Freya | Feedback - Major. - 04-24-2019 Hello, I read your info page and I found a one issue. "Verteidigung für das Rheinvolk" - Defense for the Rheinvolk - This really sounds stupid, even in english and german I would change it to this: "Schutz des Rheinvolkes" - Protection of the Rheinvolkes "Verteidigung des Rheinvolkes" - Defense of the Rheinvolkes "Schutz der Rheinlaendischen Buerger" - Protection/Defense of the Rheinland citizens It's up to you now. RE: KF| - Kriegsflotte Freya | Feedback - Spectre - 04-24-2019 As usual, the relationship between me, German and Google Translate spreads further apart. I'll switch it up with the second proposed line. Cheers.