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Aiden's Story - Discussion - DarkOddity - 10-02-2006
This is where I would like comments questions critiques ect posted for my ongoing RP story for "Aiden Patrick" Thanks :)
Main story thread located here.
Aiden's Story - Discussion - Angel - 10-02-2006
I got it all pretty much down.... :laugh:
Very good btw.
Aiden's Story - Discussion - DarkOddity - 10-02-2006
Hehe. The Pearl is making a presence in my story right now, guarantee it wont be the last time too. :)
Hitting up on a "followup" to the Hispania thanks to Aiden being exiled he didn't have much time to keep track of progress. :)
Aiden's Story - Discussion - Wolfpack98 - 10-02-2006
Very nice. very very nice. Try not to over-do the "super power" thing so it doesn't get run to death :)
Aiden's Story - Discussion - DarkOddity - 10-02-2006
Hehe. Well I don't plan on adding the ability to fly or crap like that.. lol.
As Aiden mainly seeks the comfort and strength of the Aldebaran the augmentation really gives him more of a link to his ship. Now Isabell on the other hand is somewhat his "arm". You'll notice in chapters to come she'll be doing alot of his dirty work.
Aiden's Story - Discussion - Nightfall - 10-02-2006
'Oh no, they're becoming Outcasts!' Nightfall runs off to the docks 'aargh!'. The reincarnation of the Ampoliros is still in building... The Desperado can't face them alone... wanders what's up with Santa Ana?... Then he remembers the lot of Phantoms, The Dalamar, Ember (GC) and other allies... he calms down...
:lol:
Aiden's Story - Discussion - DarkOddity - 10-02-2006
lol Nightfall.