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New faction idea! - Death.RunningVerminator - 06-28-2009
*knock knock knock*
A man at his desk stood up and walked towards the door. "What do you want here, I'm trying to do some paperwork!" "Sir, they are gathered and awaiting," came the reply. "Tell them I will be there shortly."
The man sat back down on his chair, and looked at his paper-work. He sighed to himself. "Well my wonderful kingdom. I wish the King could restore you to your former glory....No, i can... and i will."
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The King walked into the room shortly after his confidence was regained. Everyone stood. There were about 20 people in the room 10 men were seated. While 10 more stood in the corners. It was a well done room. You could tell it has been built by the finest of craftsmen. The furnishings were neatly decorated and glistened upon sight. Carvings on the corners of the wall showed the King's likeness to delicateness.
"Now then...Where should i start, hmm?" All the men looked at each other with confusion. "Ah! I know. I will start from the top." The King looked at a man to his right, and nodded. He nodded back, and left the room. "Well...when the attack happened i was currently at my office near the central docking ring of Pittsburg just filling out more paper-work and such. And then..." The King paused for a moment. Take a deep breath, and carried on with the story. "I herd the screams of the innocents. There were gunshots being fired outside the office. So i stood up, and quickly packed my most important possessions and gathered a few of my family that were close by. My main army was not available at the time of the attack, so only the nearby police and guard were able to help. Anyways, Me and the others exited the building through the underground tunnels that were installed for my own protection. When we reached the end of the tunnel there was a ship waiting for me there. But, to save my people, I had this device you see here." The King pulled a remote out of his pocket and showed the men in the room. "I pressed the top button and out came the rescue of my people! See..i had installed holes in the ground where i could put the emergency shuttles. And therefor, i did not lose all of people during the attack. I made sure that before i got on my ship and heded for safety that the others would be leaving first. One i had seen all of the shuttles fly off-" "Excuse me sir... but, where did the shuttles go?," Came a voice from one of the men situated near the table. The king looked at him. "Well they came here, right where we are now." "They came to Fort Bush?" Asked the man. "Yes, but, i cannot find them anywhere here. Well it has been a couple of years since the escape, so i would assume they went looking for jobs all across Sirus. Now that that is settled....where was i?... ah yes! Once i had seen all the other shuttles fly off, me and my accomplices went on our way as well. But we didn't go to Fort Bush. We went to Manhattan. Another back-up headquarters was there." Just then The man that had nodded to the King earlier entered the room along with a Rheinlander that seemed to have been dragged all the way to the Meeting chamber.
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"This!" Stated the man. "Is the Leader of the rebellion!" The Rheinlander looked around at all the faces staring at him. "Please...I was told to do this!...just don't hurt me!" The King walked over to the man holding the Rheinlander. Patted his back and said, "This my friends... is an outcast" Everyone in the room that was sitting, stood. Some of them even got their plasma guns ready. "Calm down everyone... He is with me," Reassured the King. "Now, please carry on Mr. Rheinlander. Well, first of all who got you up to this?" Asked the King. "Well...I...uhh..." The outcast pulled up his fist. "Oi!" *donk* "Speak up filth!" "Gah! okay okay! It was the military! The whole state of Rheinland! It...It's the war...." Everyone looked at each other, then back at him. "Explain," Stated the King. "Well...the war with Liberty and Rheinland is increasing in numbers and in population. So... we had to sabotage the infrastructure of Liberty." *Donk* "Oi!" The rebel rubbed his head. "That one hurt!" *Donk* *Donk* "Ja Ja! Stop dis!" *Donk* The king lowered his hand. "That's enough DR...." "Sorry sir," Came the reply. The King stared at the rebel leader, "So what your saying is that...Rheinland did all this to my once beautiful and majestic Kingdom?" asked the King. "Yes..." Just then, a plasma gun was fired, and the plasma was clearly shown on the wall. The rebel fell down, dead. The King looked up at everyone. And everyone looked back, stunned. The King's facial expression was that of an indescribable one. There was anger and hatred in his face now. "I...want...everything that...has to do...with Rheinland, BLOWN TO BITS! They take my glorious kingdom because of a war that has hardly anything to do with us! Well Ill just take it right back, and kill them all in the proses!" The King turned around and said, "Pittsburg... is almost safe once more.. everyone that fled from the Kingdom... should be brought back." The king strolled out of the room, mumbling something to himself, "I'm a Cold..Cold man...."
!LETS RECAP!
A man at his desk stood up and walked towards the door. "What do you want here, I'm trying to do some paperwork!" "Sir, they are gathered and awaiting," came the reply. "Tell them I will be there shortly."
The man sat back down on his chair, and looked at his paper-work. He sighed to himself. "Well my wonderful kingdom. I wish the King could restore you to your former glory....No, i can... and i will."
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The King walked into the room shortly after his confidence was regained. Everyone stood. There were about 20 people in the room 10 men were seated. While 10 more stood in the corners. It was a well done room. You could tell it has been built by the finest of craftsmen. The furnishings were neatly decorated and glistened upon sight. Carvings on the corners of the wall showed the King's likeness to delicateness.
"Now then...Where should i start, hmm?" All the men looked at each other with confusion. "Ah! I know. I will start from the top." The King looked at a man to his right, and nodded. He nodded back, and left the room. "Well...when the attack happened i was currently at my office near the central docking ring of Pittsburg just filling out more paper-work and such. And then..." The King paused for a moment. Take a deep breath, and carried on with the story. "I herd the screams of the innocents. There were gunshots being fired outside the office. So i stood up, and quickly packed my most important possessions and gathered a few of my family that were close by. My main army was not available at the time of the attack, so only the nearby police and guard were able to help. Anyways, Me and the others exited the building through the underground tunnels that were installed for my own protection. When we reached the end of the tunnel there was a ship waiting for me there. But, to save my people, I had this device you see here." The King pulled a remote out of his pocket and showed the men in the room. "I pressed the top button and out came the rescue of my people! See..i had installed holes in the ground where i could put the emergency shuttles. And therefor, i did not lose all of people during the attack. I made sure that before i got on my ship and heded for safety that the others would be leaving first. One i had seen all of the shuttles fly off-" "Excuse me sir... but, where did the shuttles go?," Came a voice from one of the men situated near the table. The king looked at him. "Well they came here, right where we are now." "They came to Fort Bush?" Asked the man. "Yes, but, i cannot find them anywhere here. Well it has been a couple of years since the escape, so i would assume they went looking for jobs all across Sirus. Now that that is settled....where was i?... ah yes! Once i had seen all the other shuttles fly off, me and my accomplices went on our way as well. But we didn't go to Fort Bush. We went to Manhattan. Another back-up headquarters was there." Just then The man that had nodded to the King earlier entered the room along with a Rheinlander that seemed to have been dragged all the way to the Meeting chamber.
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"This!" Stated the man. "Is the Leader of the rebellion!" The Rheinlander looked around at all the faces staring at him. "Please...I was told to do this!...just don't hurt me!" The King walked over to the man holding the Rheinlander. Patted his back and said, "This my friends... is an outcast" Everyone in the room that was sitting, stood. Some of them even got their plasma guns ready. "Calm down everyone... He is with me," Reassured the King. "Now, please carry on Mr. Rheinlander. Well, first of all who got you up to this?" Asked the King. "Well...I...uhh..." The outcast pulled up his fist. "Oi!" *donk* "Speak up filth!" "Gah! okay okay! It was the military! The whole state of Rheinland! It...It's the war...." Everyone looked at each other, then back at him. "Explain," Stated the King. "Well...the war with Liberty and Rheinland is increasing in numbers and in population. So... we had to sabotage the infrastructure of Liberty." *Donk* "Oi!" The rebel rubbed his head. "That one hurt!" *Donk* *Donk* "Ja Ja! Stop dis!" *Donk* The king lowered his hand. "That's enough DR...." "Sorry sir," Came the reply. The King stared at the rebel leader, "So what your saying is that...Rheinland did all this to my once beautiful and majestic Kingdom?" asked the King. "Yes..." Just then, a plasma gun was fired, and the plasma was clearly shown on the wall. The rebel fell down, dead. The King looked up at everyone. And everyone looked back, stunned. The King's facial expression was that of an indescribable one. There was anger and hatred in his face now. "I...want...everything that...has to do...with Rheinland, BLOWN TO BITS! They take my glorious kingdom because of a war that has hardly anything to do with us! Well Ill just take it right back, and kill them all in the proses!" The King turned around and said, "Pittsburg... is almost safe once more.. everyone that fled from the Kingdom... should be brought back." The king strolled out of the room, mumbling something to himself, "I'm a Cold..Cold man...."
!LETS RECAP!
OK, So here's what happened if you don't understand it.
1st. There was a King, and a Kingdom on pittsburg, parts of Manhattan, and parts of fort bush.
2nd. With a kingdom, always comes rebels, right? Rebel uprisings start to occur
3rd. Major Rebel attack on the capitol on Pittsburg
4th. About 1/4 of the population flees the planet.
5th. Rebel Leader captured, and discovered as a Rheinlander.
6th. The people of the Kingdom spreads all over Sirus
7th. King and friends leave Manhattan and go to Fort Bush in search of any citizens.
8th. None are found, and meeting is set.
9th. Meeting
10th. 3 main priorities are established
- Priority 1- Destroy all of Rheinland and/or anything that has to do with Rheinland (friendly towards)
- Priority 2- Gather all of the escapees.
- Priority 3- Make lots of money for the restoration of the Kingdom!
Please give me lots of feedback and be honest!
And yes... if you see me and some other folks flying around with this tag ----> {TRF} (The royal family) that means i have allready talked to him/her and they have joined
And i mean no offense to anyone who is strongly a "Rheinlander"
New faction idea! - Magoo! - 06-28-2009
... Umm. If I may be so bold.
Wtf?
Alright, more specifically - a Kingdom inside of the Liberty republic? Shouldn't this be in... Say, Bretonia? That'd make more sense.
New faction idea! - hack - 06-28-2009
Uh, another example of someone NOT talking to the Liberty factions and expecting people to follow it.
Kingdom? I don't think Liberty ever had a king......
Big thumbs down....
New faction idea! - Death.RunningVerminator - 06-28-2009
' Wrote:... Umm. If I may be so bold.Meh, fair enough i suppose i should put it in bretonia though
Wtf?
Alright, more specifically - a Kingdom inside of the Liberty republic? Shouldn't this be in... Say, Bretonia? That'd make more sense.
' Wrote:Uh, another example of someone NOT talking to the Liberty factions and expecting people to follow it.Its a small kingdom, not liberty itself. the king is not the king of liberty or any systems and such
Kingdom? I don't think Liberty ever had a king......
Big thumbs down....
New faction idea! - JakeSG - 06-28-2009
Liberty is not a monarchy. Never has been and never will. Perhaps if you were to take more of an occult spin, say somebody believing he's a 'Modern Day Messiah', come to deliver us all from evil?
My sincere suggestion though: Stay the hell out of Liberty. We have enough to put up with as it is. Also, find yourself some actual goals, your current ones are too generic for most factions to succeed.
New faction idea! - NerdRage - 06-28-2009
Lovely, another librety faction to pluck out of the sky in my RFP
although i don't get all the stuff about a king, this guy is a king of an unlawfull faction? as i recall librety has a prestident.
the thing is, do we need another faction, especially a libretonian one? librety pilots, no mistake, outnumber the Rheinlanders, id say that the number librety lawfuls is about equal to all Rheinland-based pilots.
so this entire faction was started under a kings whim? what rebellion? what damage to the librety infrastructure? am i misssing something?
New faction idea! - Death.RunningVerminator - 06-28-2009
Gah... I told you guys, ill try to make it bretonian or something. But, he's not the president or the king of all liberty, just a small part. And it is not unlawful
who is the president anyways?
New faction idea! - Cellulanus - 06-28-2009
I don't think that Liberty would allow for a kingdom to exist within the Government.
Remember that these folks are still Americans.
New faction idea! - Magoo! - 06-28-2009
Quote:Lovely, another librety faction to pluck out of the sky in my RFP
although i don't get all the stuff about a king, this guy is a king of an unlawfull faction? as i recall librety has a prestident.
the thing is, do we need another faction, especially a libretonian one? librety pilots, no mistake, outnumber the Rheinlanders, id say that the number librety lawfuls is about equal to all Rheinland-based pilots.
so this entire faction was started under a kings whim? what rebellion? what damage to the librety infrastructure? am i misssing something?
I'm... Sorry. Totally off topic. It's Liberty. E before R. Sorry... Don't mean to sound offensive just... It was bothering me.
But eh... Yeah. Give it some more thought, detail, etc. and put it in Bretonia (just a reiteration). You could probably pull off a Earlship or some such there.
New faction idea! - JakeSG - 06-28-2009
Mindblank. Forgot his name. Last I heard it was being roleplayed from the Liberty One by Del, but I believe he resigned or something.
By the way, if you take a monarchy spin in Bretonia you'll probably find yourself hostile with the local Law. They already have a Queen and will probably declare you as a revolutionist or something. Rebellion kinda thing.
Another option would be a Gallic Council/Marquis faction, attempting to overthrow the current monarchy for their evil doings, claiming you're part of a lost line of the royal family who should rightfully be in charge.