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Character Feedback - Colonel Z.e.r.o. - 08-12-2009
I'm trying not to stop writing for this one like I did with Bianca, Fuschia Lance is the name. I'm trying to keep it straightforward but interesting at the same time. These first paragraphs are just a short narrative intro as to the character's former and current life came to be. Any suggestions? writing tips? Etc.
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=44483
Character Feedback - Colonel Z.e.r.o. - 08-14-2009
no feedback of any sort?
Character Feedback - darthbeck - 08-14-2009
its good. nothing negitive to say about it.
Character Feedback - Colonel Z.e.r.o. - 08-21-2009
I'll try to add journal entries and movies even in time, just that work has been both hard and frustrating.
Character Feedback - Colonel Z.e.r.o. - 09-01-2009
I started another one as well. this one more of a journal entry from the Captain's point of view.
What do you think?
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=46007
Character Feedback - Colonel Z.e.r.o. - 09-08-2009
Well?
Character Feedback - Colonel Z.e.r.o. - 10-07-2009
Still waiting...
Character Feedback - Barrier - 10-08-2009
Well. These are some really nice stories. Only one major suggestion: check your spelling. There are a lot of misspelled words and missing letters.
Otherwise, you ideas are great. I have to add that I would wish to read more about the Freelancer.
Character Feedback - Colonel Z.e.r.o. - 10-10-2009
' Wrote:Well. These are some really nice stories. Only one major suggestion: check your spelling. There are a lot of misspelled words and missing letters.
Otherwise, you ideas are great. I have to add that I would wish to read more about the Freelancer.
Thanks, I'm glad to say I will try to further her story when things are back to "normal".
Character Feedback - Colonel Z.e.r.o. - 12-27-2009
' Wrote:Well. These are some really nice stories. Only one major suggestion: check your spelling. There are a lot of misspelled words and missing letters.I added more about her backstory, if I feel up to it, I'll post both the movie and a brief summary about it tomorrow.
Otherwise, you ideas are great. I have to add that I would wish to read more about the Freelancer.