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Arthur Dgahr review and feedback - Guest - 09-14-2009 This is the longest and most detailed RP on the server of mine, this is the fruit of year and ahalf of challenges, drama, enemies and friends. Got thoughts or comments? Please do tell. The oldest ones are below. Special RP request http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=45919 http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=47110 http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...72&hl=dgahr http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=29491&hl= http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...c=23606&hl= http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...93&hl=Dgahr Other mentions of Dgahr http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?s=...st&p=662068 (post 130) http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...45&hl=Dgahr http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...mp;#entry337065 Old name "[Merc]Sindroms" http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...mp;#entry323764 http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...mp;#entry353000 (#659 and up) http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...mp;#entry359423 http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...mp;#entry362992 Arthur Dgahr review and feedback - Denelo - 09-14-2009 Well, overall, I like it. The first thing that strikes me about it, though, is that it seems to all be able an excuse to take two of the most popular RPs on the server - Nomad and a love story - and put them together. Now, that doesn't mean it can't be a good RP - it is, in fact - but the basis of the story does matter quite a bit, as that's generally peoples' first impression of it. "What is this all about? Oh, a Nomad love story? Not worth reading." See the problem? However, having said that, the quality of the writing itself is pretty decent, and I like the way its written in first and third person in various posts. I didn't see much overlapping of first/third person, which I like. The content itself was pretty good, particularly the character personality struggles, and I'll be interested in seeing which direction this character goes in. Arthur Dgahr review and feedback - Guest - 09-14-2009 You know, now that I look back at it...it never was my intention for it to be a love story. Or a story involving nomads. It all started from my days as an exile from Liberty, a Liberty Navy taged (tag which i soon removed) and merc ided spatial. I was taken in by a 101st and a SOB who led me to a system i never knew existed, Omicron Alpha and I soon accepted it as my home. Two months later I first met Telchine and the rp began. I was fascinated of the Keepers roleplay quality and they soon became my favourite faction to rp with. I helped them fend off attackers, I was rewarded by visions and an artifact. The days moved on, and I met more and more keepers and it was fun, I traveled around the server with them and learned the written and unwritten rules of rp. *daydreams* Arthur Dgahr review and feedback - Guest - 09-18-2009 bump Arthur Dgahr review and feedback - Guest - 09-25-2009 bump