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Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - Seth Karlo - 09-14-2009
Please, I want to hear good points and bad, areas I can improve and areas I'm doing well in.
The characters:
Salazar.Kithe (Sabre)
SaIazar.Kithe (Tridente)
Immortal.Hunter (Dreadnought)
Story: http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=38022
Story for Siona (His daughter): http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=44015
Tales:
The Murder of the Survivors of the Darwin
The attack on Leeds
Rebirth of the Hunter and the destruction of the Stonehenge
The Destruction of the Immortal Hunter.
Thanks!
-Seth
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - Tomtomrawr - 09-14-2009
I read the story of Salazar Kithe a while ago, and thought it was brilliant. It actually inspired me to start writing the Personality Dysfunction. When I get to the point where he has a ship, I need to meet you in space so I canz pwnz youz.
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - Seth Karlo - 10-20-2009
Pwnz me eh?
*Chuckles*
Anyway, I like how few people read or respond to anything in this forum. People never read the stories...
Oh well.
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - Tomtomrawr - 10-20-2009
' Wrote:Pwnz me eh?I wrote that post over a month ago, so now instead of "Pwnz youz" it is "Joinz youz".
*Chuckles*
Anyway, I like how few people read or respond to anything in this forum. People never read the stories...
Oh well.
And I'm glad your back to writing the story, you can count on me to be a regular reader.
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - Donutman - 10-25-2009
Seth, the Buccaneers pwnzored your face. :P
Also, something I never got, how the heck is Salazar still living? He's like 1200 years old!
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - Tomtomrawr - 10-25-2009
' Wrote:Seth, the Buccaneers pwnzored your face. :P1600 years old actually. But he doesn't look a day over 1500:P.
Also, something I never got, how the heck is Salazar still living? He's like 1200 years old!
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - AJBeast - 10-25-2009
*waves*
HAI!
I read your story a while back. Tis cool. Haven't seen you ingame though. Except that one time I was running away from a BAF on my Buccaneer and you were just sitting there... but you didn't say anything...
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - stardust47 - 10-25-2009
It has win.
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - Seth Karlo - 10-25-2009
' Wrote:Seth, the Buccaneers pwnzored your face. :P
Also, something I never got, how the heck is Salazar still living? He's like 1200 years old!
Read the story, all is explained there:)
Salazar Kithe feedback forum! - Seth Karlo - 10-28-2009
Latest post is veeeery graphic rape/torture scene... Is it too graphic? Should I edit it?