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The Danzigs Storyline - Cyberanson - 09-30-2009
Alright folks, I want to address those of you, who are interested in my story.
The [RM-RNC]Danzig
If you encounter logical errors or just plain crap, let me know. I would be glad to have some opinions on it.
The Danzigs Storyline - Barrier - 09-30-2009
A very nice beginning to a story. I really liked the idea with the pictures, they add a lot of clarity to the story.
:)Pros: Very good overall. Nice description of places. (like the hangar or the lounge)
:(Cons: The green fonts are a bit hard to read. (maybe you should use this <strike>Test</strike> Test, and also this <strike>Test</strike> Test) Describe some of the responsibilities that August has after promotion.
Great Job!
The Danzigs Storyline - Cyberanson - 09-30-2009
Hey thanks for the hint! I just copied the text from our RM forums, therefore it's harder to read here. I will adjust it over the time.
The Danzigs Storyline - Barrier - 10-02-2009
Gah, Vanessa's text burns the eyes a bit. Change it to something lighter plox. ;)
The Danzigs Storyline - Cyberanson - 10-02-2009
Problem is: I use the IPB 2.1 Default template when browsing the forums. Looks all good to me?
Do you have a suggestion for the color, which looks good in every template?
The Danzigs Storyline - Barrier - 10-02-2009
EDIT: Good job on the story so far, can't wait for the next part.:)
Also well written by Maj. Sovok.