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Green sundown feedback thread - Sturmwind - 01-23-2010
The story:
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=58434
Feedback, constructive criticism much appreciated.
Green sundown feedback thread - Elven - 01-29-2010
I like it! no critism right now, through