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Valentine_Creir - Valentine-Creir - 01-25-2010
Well go ahead, tell me what you think of it. I wrote a few stories awhile back but never really finished them. Was this one ok? Anyway to improve? Before the improving part, i realize i need to describe things more, but couldnt fit those in. Wrote that story in about 3-4 hours. Also, i realize it has a few spelling errors but im to lazy to go back and fix em.
Valentine_Creir - Corsair - 02-01-2010
Links for the lazy!