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Project Transcendence feedback page - Akura - 03-26-2010
So you read Project Transcendence, here is the place to leave feedback!
I originally wasn't going to have a feedback thread, but after getting this:
Maj. Voelkel Wrote:Project Transcendence is a masterpiece. Keep it up.
[18:41:05] Pilgrim: Hey Akura
[18:41:23] Pilgrim: that's one of the best stories I've ever read
[18:41:46] Dave (Akura): Which one?
[18:42:03] Pilgrim: Project Transcendence
[18:42:08] Dave (Akura): Oh, thanks
I thought maybe I'd leave a place for you to leave your thoughts on the story, critisism, suggestions and general thoughts on Georgia Brown as a character.
Tell me what I'm doing right, what needs improving and what you think I should do.
Thanks!
Project Transcendence feedback page - Boss - 03-26-2010
Georgia's spot-on about the Second Fleet...
Ouroboros is quite the fan of her work, you know.
Project Transcendence feedback page - Akura - 03-26-2010
' Wrote:Georgia's spot-on about the Second Fleet...
Ouroboros is quite the fan of her work, you know.
Put it this way:
Order Indie Lolwuts killed in Self defence as a member of the Order: Eight
Nomads killed as a member of the Order: Zero
Project Transcendence feedback page - Hell Hunter - 03-26-2010
I love it every single of it. and nice editing with the pictures
I like et ;)
Project Transcendence feedback page - Guest - 03-27-2010
Loving it so far.
One of the few stories that I've been able to read all the way through.
I demand you write more.
Project Transcendence feedback page - Akura - 03-27-2010
Thanks! That's the motivation I need ^_^
Thanks to Treewrym and Sara for helping contibute too.
Project Transcendence feedback page - Ryummel - 03-30-2010
I really like your way of writting the stories (well this feedback is only for P.Transcendence, but I'll include The Siren too). Please, never give up!
Project Transcendence feedback page - Geromix - 03-31-2010
I love your stories. Its the only one that I have read completely.
The most amazing thing that sets this story apart is how well the various screen shots and pictures are spaced throughout the story. They appear at the right time and and at the right place and all of them fit so well into the story. Very well edited and very neatly presented.
Keep it up! And i am looking for more!
Project Transcendence feedback page - Rodent - 03-31-2010
The writing itself I would say, is not brilliant, but it's pretty good, but Akura's Screenshot and Photoshop abuse is what sets it apart.
Good work, all in all.
Project Transcendence feedback page - etiainen - 04-10-2010
I've just finished reading it and I must say I find it really interesting and amazing:)Hats off