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Feedback on Audiobiography writing-skills - Mr.Fabulous - 04-06-2010

Just wondering what my readers think I should improve on. Any Ideas? Leonardo's supposed to act all melancholy and stern, but has his moments of confusion, disbelief and humor.


Feedback on Audiobiography writing-skills - Mr.Fabulous - 04-12-2010

anyone?:laugh:

Maybe I should've placed it on the FEEDBACK part on the forums... would anyone please place this post on that part?


Feedback on Audiobiography writing-skills - darkxy - 04-12-2010

<strike>You should post this [url=]http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showforum=93[here.[/url]</strike>

Oops sorry i didn't notice second post.Anyway, i might read it some-time later.