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Lethal greed - Strichev - 06-03-2010
So, there it is, my first RP story. It's not written in anything near descent English, so please help me with sugestions.
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=70585
Please take time to read the massive wall of text, full of grammar and spelling mistakes. Not to mention poor word choice and hardly undearstandable sentances, comprised of wrong tenses.