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"The Longest Day" Feedback Thread - Marcus Lindberg - 06-18-2010
Link to The Longest Day story
Was hoping for some feedback from any readers out there, will be most appreciated. I'm trying to go for a 24 styled suspense/thriller story. Any feedback on the writing style would also be appreciated.
Thanks!
- Lindburger