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Feedback for The Concealed Puppeteer - Tomtomrawr - 06-27-2010
I feel very proud of this story. It's the best work that I've ever done so far and hope to go far with it. I'd like to hear comments with what people think of it, and whether it could use any improvements.
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Any comments are appreciated and welcomed. Thanks for reading.