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The Heist Feedback - ejoman3002 - 06-29-2010
Hey just wana know what people think about this. Its my first story so Constructive critisism will be welcome.
havnt worked on it for a while so im gona see the comments to see whether its worth continuing or not
http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...86&hl=heist
The Heist Feedback - Sprolf - 06-29-2010
Your signature looks fine, and your story looks interesting.
I think I might follow it and see where it ends up.