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AceJokers feedback - AceJoker - 07-21-2010
Hi folks. I started to write Taggarts personal neuro-log and I want to know if I've done something wrong. It's my first story, so don't get angry that easy, I'm just a freshman here, who has much to learn...:D
Diary
EDIT: Expect pathetic spelling and grammar issues, cuz I always messing up with the simple past and past participle. But hey, at least I tried write something, then troll through the storys-threads.