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Light's Path Feedback - Fenikss74 - 08-17-2010 You can see the story here! This story is about a man that is slowly becoming a nomad... blah... blah... blah. Anyway, read it and I hope you will understand it. I think about making a 5-7 parts of it, so wait for them! O yeah... Feedback here please! EDIT: Oh also, if you don't understand anything, see a mistake or you just want to say hi, post here. |