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Ghost in the machine / C.a.i.n - Printable Version +- Discovery Gaming Community (https://discoverygc.com/forums) +-- Forum: Role-Playing (https://discoverygc.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?fid=9) +--- Forum: Stories and Biographies (https://discoverygc.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?fid=56) +---- Forum: RP Stories Feedback Forum (https://discoverygc.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?fid=29) +---- Thread: Ghost in the machine / C.a.i.n (/showthread.php?tid=48318) |
Ghost in the machine / C.a.i.n - jakub963 - 10-11-2010 Well the name pretty sums is up... I wrote a story yet i dont know what you folks think... Here is the place to say what i did wrong... Here is link to the story> http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=81952 Ghost in the machine / C.a.i.n - jakub963 - 10-14-2010 Added some... edited some... Throw in your opinion. It would really help me... Ghost in the machine / C.a.i.n - jakub963 - 10-16-2010 Added two sub-episodes and fixed some errors... I wonder if somebody ever reply to this... |