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Ghost in the machine / C.a.i.n - jakub963 - 10-11-2010
Well the name pretty sums is up...
I wrote a story yet i dont know what you folks think... Here is the place to say what i did wrong...
Here is link to the story> http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=81952
Ghost in the machine / C.a.i.n - jakub963 - 10-14-2010
Added some... edited some... Throw in your opinion. It would really help me...
Ghost in the machine / C.a.i.n - jakub963 - 10-16-2010
Added two sub-episodes and fixed some errors...
I wonder if somebody ever reply to this...