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+---- Thread: New story that i started writing(Mikes Story and logs) (/showthread.php?tid=49337)
New story that i started writing(Mikes Story and logs) - Crusader4 - 11-02-2010
You can find a story here and you can post some feedback here :)
Now a few questions, am i going the right way, do you kinda like the story so far?
if you think i should add something to it, post, if you want to fix grammar mistakes,
PM me with fixed version, THANKS.
Now a few questions, am i going the right way, do you kinda like the story so far?
if you think i should add something to it, post, if you want to fix grammar mistakes,
PM me with fixed version, THANKS.
New story that i started writing(Mikes Story and logs) - Crusader4 - 11-05-2010
Bumpeh :(
New story that i started writing(Mikes Story and logs) - [Cerberus] Illusive Man - 11-05-2010
Some grammatical errors are present, but that's not the actual problem.
The story is pretty well worked-out, in short words: Thumbs Up for your Biography.
New story that i started writing(Mikes Story and logs) - Crusader4 - 11-14-2010
' Wrote:Some grammatical errors are present, but that's not the actual problem.
The story is pretty well worked-out, in short words: Thumbs Up for your Biography.
Thanks, too bad, i didn't had any time to work on it more these days. :(