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[MQS] The Maquis
Offline The Maquis.
12-09-2018, 07:49 PM, (This post was last modified: 12-10-2018, 07:59 PM by The Maquis..)
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General Information:
General Information:
Full Faction Name: The Maquis
Faction Tag: [MQS]
ID: The Maquis ID
IFF: The Maquis IFF
House Origin: Gallia

Ship Naming Convention:
Transporters, Freighters: [MQS]MT-Shipname (French)
Special Ships: [MQS]Callsign
Fighters: [MQS]Firstname.Surname (If both names don't fit use: [MQS]F.Surname)
Bombers: [MQS]Firstname:Surname (If both names don't fit use: [MQS]F:Surname)


[+] The Maquis ID (Requested Official ID)
The Maquis are a terrorist faction which broke away from the Council, who want to overthrow the Gallic monarchy. They often attack civilian targets. They are allied with the Council.

Pilot carrying this unlawful ID is a member of the Maquis, who:
- Can attack any Gallic Lawful ships within their Zone of Influence. Can treat transports as combat targets.
- Can demand cargo or credits from any ship within their Zone of Influence.
- Can assist allied or friendly ships in self-defense.
- Cannot ally with any lawfuls, except against Gallic lawfuls.
- Cannot use any transport with more than 4,300 cargo except for the l'Ane and Vache.

Zone of Influence: Gallia, Gallic Borderworlds, Taus, New London, Edinburgh, Newcastle, Leeds
Allowed ships: Fighters, Freighters, Transports, Gunboats

Goals:
Primary: Overthrowing the Gallic Throne through acts of terrorism
Secondary: Uniting the Gallic unlawfuls against the Crown
Others
1: Cease all supply operations that Gallic Corporations and Royal Navy are doing.
2: Support the cause of the Council and Maquis in general.
3: Cause as much terrorism to Gallic trade as possible.

Roster:
[MQS]Jean-Paul.Courbet @Shaggy - Faction Leader
[MQS]Hunter - @TacticalNoodle - Member
[MQS]Caron - @Smokey - Member
[MQS]Michelle.Crux - @-Rax- - Member
[MQS]A.Christophe - @~Chio - Member
[MQS]Henry.Pelletier - @"Chi" - Member

Rank Structure:
1. Meneur
2. Premier
3, Capitaine
4. Lieutenant Senior
5. Lieutenant
6. Junior Lieutenant

Faction overview:
Since their break from Then Council, this small Maquis cell have openly committed several acts of terrorism that goes beyond what is normally justifiable during wartime. This splinter cell will give no mercy to any of their victims, especially if it is civilian's who actively show their support to the Crown. This group of terrorist's are known for their brutally effective and efficient ability to strategise their operations to make sure they are a success with minimal loss. This group on do not regularaly collect any evidence on any of their target's unless it is to help them identify whom are safe to call a idealistic friend. If someone is suspected of actively working for the Crown, even so much as organizing aid packages for their solider's. They will immediatly be targetted by the Maquis if caught in action. This small spliner cell will again give no mercy to those who are deemed a threat.

The actions of this splinter cell have earned the respect of other Gallic organisations such as Gallic Brigands and Unione Corse. Due to this, it puts the Maquis and other Gallic unlawfuls into a unique position to be able to successfully coordinate attacks on the Gallic Royal Navy due to the well nurtured friendships. This helps all four groups to gather resources to be able to deploy more of a threat in the long run.

Despite the popularity with other groups within Gallia. The Maquis' actions have driven away a large percentage of support from the civilians of Gallia. While The Council are grateful for the support the Maquis provides, they largely enjoy the support from many within the Gallic Metal Services and other corporations. The Maquis Spliner Cell are viewed as the largest terrorist organisation within Gallic, this is due to the group being full of murderer's, a large amount of people who are guilty of war crimes and alot more serious crimes. This view they recieve from Gallic Civilians, police, and Navy is what they wanted to be viewed as. The Maquis will outwardly claim to act in order to free the people from the greater threat of the Monarchy, but inwardly more than a few of their actions serve as a vegeance for personal grievances that they blame the Crown's force for.

Faction History:
In the early 7th century A.G.S, the Maquis became responsible for a series of massive terrorist attacks. These attacks claimed over two thousand civilians within the Gallic cities. This harmed the Council's reputation and so much wanted all the Maquis expelled and where now to seek new bases of operations. With that people would think that the two groups would become enemies, but no, the Maquis evolved into something larger which was a group for fortune seekers. The group started working with The Council and became one of the most feared terrorist organisations Gallia had seen for years. The Maquis using this to their advantaged by broadening their range of assaults they made against the Crown. While supporting piracy and smuggling. In addition the current Maquis to date have played a important role within the Second Gallic War, fighting alongside the Council against the Gallic Royal Navy, while gaining trust of the other Gallic unlawful groups. It became clear that the Gallic unlawful groups wanted the same as The Maquis, which wanted the same as the Council.

Bases of Operations:
Avon Hideout - Ill-de-France
Caussade Depot - Roussillon
Chambery Base - Burgundy
Eplessier Depot - Picardy
Grenoble Depot - Dauphine
Lapalisse Depot - Tau -53
Mazagran Depot - Champagne
Verdun Base - Lorraine

Allowed Ships:
MJ-1 "Gecko" Council Light Fighter - 100% Tech Cell
LM Series "Tournez" Gallic Metal Service Light Miner - 100% Tech Cell
BLF11 "Mistral" Brigands Light Fighter - 75% Tech Cell
CL22 "Mistral Noir" Union Corse Light Fighter - 75% Tech Cell

MJ-2 "Agama" Council Heavy Fighter - 100% Tech Cell
UX-256 "Moonbeam" Gallic Civilian Heavy Fighter - 100% Tech Cell
BHF13 "Cuirassier" Brigand Heavy Fighter - 75% Tech Cell
CB14 "Cuirassier Noir" Union Corse Heavy Fighter - 75% Tech Cell

HM Series "Courbe" Gallic Metal Service Heavy Miner - 100% Tech Cell
MJ-4 "Stellion" Council Very Heavy Fighter - 100% Tech Cell
UY -258 "Sunbeam" Gallic Civilian Very Heavy Fighter - 100% Tech Cell

DS Series "Plier" Gallic Metal Service Deep Space Miner - 100% Tech Cell

BJ-6 "Basilisk" Council Bomber - 100% Tech Cell
UZ-300 "Eclipse" Gallic civilian bomber - 100% Tech Cell
BB73 "Jaguar" Brigands Bomber - 75% Tech Cell
BG75 "Jaguar Noir" Union Corse Bomber - 75% Tech Cell

"Perilous" Council Gunboat - 100% Tech Cell (But we can't use it due to our ID does not allow)
BGB2008 "Asco" Brigand Gunboat - 75% Tech Cell (But we can't use it due to our ID does not allow)

MCU-1 "Aurochs" Gallic Freighter - 100% Tech Cell
BFR19 "Courier" Brigand Freighter - 100% Tech Cell
"Briller" Gallic Repair Ship - 100% Tech Cell
VEU-19 "Tarvos" Council Freighter - 100% Tech Cell

"Lucullus" Gallic Liner - 100% Tech Cell
ME-UH "Vache" Gallic Train - 100% Tech Cell
BT485 "l'Ane" Brigand Transport - 100% Tech Cell

Diplomacy:
Allied:
Other Maquis Cells

Friendly:
The Council ([C])
The Unioners (UN|)
Gallic Brigands
Unione Corse

Neutral:
No one

Suspicious:
Everyone else.

Hostile:
Gallic Royal Navy
Gallic Royal Intelligence
Gallic Royal Police
EFL Oil & Machinery
Gallic Metal Service
Ile-de-France Shipping

Join us on Discord at @ join link
// All applicants that are accepted will recieved either a Agama Heavy Fighter or a Basilik Bomber.
// Money is on [MQS]Bank Please take the required funds from there. Thank you very much.
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Offline Rantari
12-10-2018, 06:36 PM,
#2
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Posts: 188
Threads: 13
Joined: Jul 2017

Just some feedback on the write up, I suggest removing parts of your allowed ships section. There’s no sense listing ships you can’t use because of your ID but also maybe just list the ships you intend to use, you could always add or remove some later on but the list looks very long at the moment. I’d be very surprised if you had members flying stargazers or Rock badgers on a regular basis. Smile

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Offline Laz
12-10-2018, 07:01 PM, (This post was last modified: 12-24-2018, 12:06 PM by Laz.)
#3
(Sorta) Retired Code Monkey
Posts: 1,904
Threads: 106
Joined: Jan 2014

A few notes from me.

I would suggest reworking a lot of your formatting as it really feels like an eyesore currently. Certain things are indented incorrectly, the text is large, in your face, and just a tad too blinding.
Like @Rantari, I would suggest removing ships that you cannot fly as well as those you can but haven't really done the RP to be able to use.
There are also a few instances of broken or malformed English within your writeup, and I suggest a second look.

I also think, given your conduct to this point, it's rather soon to be pursuing officialdom. Gallic groups probably have it as one of the hardest to get official due to how the region is and its activity, and from what I've seen thus far, this group seems to lack a bit of control and the ability to process feedback with a controlled manner. From my experiences in game, and from what I've seen on the forums, you're extremely defensive about pretty much everything.

Just my two cents.

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Offline DarkTails
12-10-2018, 07:15 PM,
#4
Goddess of Boop
Posts: 1,773
Threads: 115
Joined: Aug 2016

I have to agree with Laz, formating could use some touching up. Especially in regards to seeking officialdom. Many factions always seek it way too soon in my opinion. They dont let the air of being a new faction subside and get fully prepared. This faction is just over 2 weeks old and you're seeking officialdom, when personally I haven't seen the faction conduct itsepf as an official faction should.

Let time pass and the air of being new pass. Ensure those that have interest now will still have interest in the longhaul.
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Offline The Maquis.
12-10-2018, 08:03 PM,
#5
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Posts: 26
Threads: 11
Joined: Nov 2018

Taken into consideration from all three of the feedbacks regarding our official faction creation request. Some edits have been done to fix the indent, and what ships will be used. We will take a second read through the write up and do our best for spelling and punctuation.

We understand that Gallia is one of the hardest places to create an official faction due to the activity levels, but since Maquis have been active, there has been a large activity rush there, and we hope for it to be a long period of time also. Alot of the Maquis members are motivated at this moment in time, and aslong as our leadership stays active, our members will stay active and motivated also. There is alot of roleplay in the works currently to keep us active which will help us gain some votes hopefully to get one step closer to becoming an official faction.

Also regarding our feedback, there has been a few bad feedback responses, but also a few positive ones too, but the way we see it, if we were not active, then who will be active in gallia? Who will bring roleplay, pvp and interactions to the inside parts of Gallia? Not only that but we are also providing roleplay on the forums, and ingame to other factions, which there is evidence of.

I hope this helps and will change you're minds on us, but we are serious about this, and we would like to gain the support, trust and assistance from anyone willing to help.
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Offline St.Denis
12-24-2018, 11:15 AM,
#6
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Posts: 100,615
Threads: 1,347
Joined: Dec 2011

Money taken, added to Tracker.

Good luck

'I would like to be half as clever as some people like to believe they are'
Life is full of disappointments, it is how we handle them that helps to define us, as a person
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Offline Dino
03-14-2019, 06:08 PM,
#7
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Posts: 1,832
Threads: 91
Joined: Mar 2011

The staff has decided that your request will be denied this time. You are free to re-apply if you wish.
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