Adventures on Hascosay - Feedback

[Leo "Thunderbird"]

=Link to story=

Hello everyone. This is probably my first solo-writing story ever on Disco forums and I am not very well experienced in it. I should tell you that the story is more of entertainment than roleplay, but players and factions indirectly involved in the story can use it for their characters' promotion.

Despite the story remaining WIP, I will be glad to read your comments and wishes only if they don't touch questions below:

• Yes, I understand, my English is far from perfection.
  
• As it was said above, the story was made on purpose to entertain Disco community. It is likely that someone will like this format
  
• No, massive Hascosay takeover and further invasion haven't been planned. Vagrants and Void Faes players have nothing to worry about in regards to this.
  
• Kudos to @Ninkurra for providing some current and future details about the world.
  

Have fun while reading.

[Ninkurra]

Good luck with your adventure in frozen hell~