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Another Line in the Ledger -- Feedback

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Another Line in the Ledger -- Feedback
Offline Sayne
10 hours ago, (This post was last modified: 9 hours ago by Sayne.)
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Another Line in the Ledger is an idea I had for a story for a while (mostly after watching Peaky Blinders, honestly) and the work has been ongoing to write it in a way that both makes sense and has an ending. I'd be lying if I said I hadn't considered creating a faction once the story is concluded with the Hollow Crown as a Rogue faction in universe...but I suck at leading people, so probably not--at most maybe a character or two might exist in universe from my story after it wraps up. I dunno, I might change my mind between now and then.

I've lacked updates on the story of late due to IRL shenanigans hamstringing my creative flow. I've got some plans on updating the story and continuing it's arc to it's completion.

Feedback, suggestions, and constructive criticism welcomed.

I've lost people who meant the world to me...and I'm still doing just fine.
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I'm coming for everything they said I couldn't have.
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Offline Ventoline
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Well, Sayne, if you allow me to comment, I think this is top quality stuff, I just threw up my legs on my desk and was reading your story like one of those Protomolecule books.

Keep it coming, please! The server needs more of this in my opinion, ships and characters with real backgrounds you cannot wait to find out what they are up to next!

Cheers,
Vent
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