Well , my old feedback thread I made in flood is long gone ( and neglected... *sniff*), so its time to make a shiny new one in a shiny new section of the forums! Hurray!
My stuff:
-Mr Unusual/Andrew Beast:
The Rise of the Ferocity- This one was a sort of long, overdrawn explanation on how I got my RPC.
Hidden Identity- The Origin of a Codename- The story on how Andrew had to adopt the codename Mr Unusual. It has two bits, past and present. I think it turned out rather well.
Vanilla Flavoured Adventures- Ah , this one was alot of fun to do. It was a small joint project I did with Darkard a while back. Basically him and I flew underlevel CSVs and did small trade runs inside Liberty , RPing with everyone and throwing around jokes like its noones business. Unfortunatelly , we both got uninterested after the AFA bounty, cause everywhere we went we had a flock of indie mercs or BHs just waiting for us to go over the underlevel level...
And some log that served more as a flashback sort thing. That one is so crappy and filled with grammatical mistakes that I wont even link it. Look it up at your own risk.
Beast's Salvaging & Recycling- The latest "chapter" that is not really a chapter of my character. Basically, now that he has got his identity back, he wants to claw towards the top of the business ladder. I've had this one written, waiting to be posted for a month or so, but I couldn't be arsed... Heh. This is leading to a nice little crescendo... but I don't wanna spoil anything.
-Adam Tarnet
Loss, Despair and Madness - Yeah , this guy is my terrorist-ish guy. His story is on hold for now untill I finish the Mr Unusual one.
Don't worry, this will get way more interesting quite soon. Not to spoil anything of course, but I got two words for ya : Epic Battle:P
Also , I would do a story from various angles , but the last time I tried that it got all mixed up and the characters lost their personality somewhat in the middle of it...
And thanks! The first time someone gave feedback on my story:)
Well, I finished reading the origins of a codename. Nice!
Only one thing. If Kiyoteru knew that Andrew was coming, how come he didn't patch up a greater fleet? Btw, that's not a "Con", just wondering. He probably bit off more than he could chew :laugh:
Newest "chapter" of the Andrew Beast story is up. It is a bit shorter than the last ones, but I guess that was due to the format that I chose to follow this time around. Don't worry, I'm already working on the next, and it will be in the usual format. ( if you already know what it is , shut up.)
