The Stories of Pilot Marshall: Feedback!

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So this is the thread for my feedback. Tell me if you liked, didn't like, etc.

Criticism is always welcome. Also, if the pilot of the Black.Rose could tell me more accurately what you had said, that would be appreciated. I couldn't remember exactly what the conversation was. Thanks!

edit: Here is a link to the story.

http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?showtopic=48452

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Thanks to MikeyH for the banner.

I was going to turn your ship into something that would have been better named "Lada" but I was told to be nice.