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Offline Rodent
03-30-2010, 07:38 PM,
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http://discoverygc.com/forums/index.php?sh...mp;#entry957875

Discusses about an insane man's ambition. It's in the formative stages, I will get him rolling soon. Basically, that man is not afraid to do what it takes.

Please help me, my english is not that good, and feedback will be appreciated.
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Offline Birdtalon
03-30-2010, 09:28 PM,
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' Wrote:Please help me, my english is not that good, and feedback will be appreciated.

LOL!

Your English is better than mine, and I live in the UK.

I love the story too.

[Image: MiPYb7j.png]
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Offline Rodent
04-19-2010, 07:20 PM,
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I'd enjoy some feedback.
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Offline Rodent
05-30-2010, 11:13 AM,
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Eleven chapters up, and still no feedback?
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Offline Sprolf
06-02-2010, 08:35 PM,
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THIS IS A CRIME, THEN.


It's quite interesting thus far... I like Ansel's attitude toward things, heh.
The story is definitely winding up to be interesting, I'll keep reading it if you keep updating it.

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