"The Fate of a Rogue Girl" Feedback Thread

[Korny]

The Story

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Anyway, I just want to hear some Feedback on one of my works. Critism is appreciated since I want to improve my writing a bit. I also need a bit motivation to keep that story going since there's a bit dust on it now.:)

Just tell me how you like it so far, and maybe, if you already encountered me ingame, you could give some feedback on ingame RP aswell, thanks. :cool:

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[LegendOfTheWolf]

All I've seen so far is fantastic RP from you. Like you've said the RP is gathering dust, but try and keep it fresh, meet new players to RP with. You're not always restricted to RP with the people you have met already.

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My opinion is outdated

[Korny]

Thanks a lot Wolf :3 And yeah, best idea is that I go look for some "friends" again. Thanks for the advice, I'll try to keep her alive ;)

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[Osilon]

Awesome win fun to RP with you.
:P

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A million dollars isn't cool. You know what is cool? A basilisk.

[Korny]

:'3 Thank you

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