feedback for a developing website based char background

[kersch_wasser]

http://blutendherz.webs.com


yar...im working on it and such but everyone else seems to be either asleep..afk..or taking a lunchbreak..so id like it if someone could help me out here....willing to talk on skype (actually that would be preferred)


any trolls should check the disclaimers section before flaming

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Dropping from the 3rd-story dorm room I'm in would be painful.

[kersch_wasser]

cmon..someone must be interested...i added new text recently

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Dropping from the 3rd-story dorm room I'm in would be painful.