4.86 story suggestion

[ShadowKnows]

** Note: ended to go into greater detail upon feed back**
** 2nd note ( to self) dont attempt to write a forum post while hauling**

-Liberty-
The War against RhineLand is going well, after long years of war Liberty is gaining a firm upper hand following the rise of a new and Brillaitn Admiral Toshi, an Orphan Kusari has used a brilliant tactical mind with a extensive knowledge of history. following a huge depression in Liberty's economy the war effort has been redoubled, Many of the liberal politician advocating "peace" in the form of surrender...have been all but voted out and Liberty is entering what some dare call the 2nd Golden age. Even rogues have been almsot totally driven out of the core systems thanks to both Military/Police forces and citizen Militias.

New Minor Faction in Liberty:
Patriotic Knight Corp
The Patriotic Knights corp is a faction with Orgins that are largely clouded in rumor and Legend of sorts, The group it self claims to have its roots back in the founding of liberty but it essentially "apeared" on the National scene in 813.95, a very short time before the Liberty-Rhineland war erupted. Their role is equally as clouded as their Origin, depending on who you talk to the PKC is either a band of right wing extremists or a Valiant citizen militia. But, The PKC is a very large contributor to Libertarian & right wing Politician, having their seat of Power in Texas system and wide spread support in Liberty, the PKC is widely ( to an extent) ignored by law enforcement,Primarily because PKC directs their efforts at attacking Liberty rouges & harassing Rhineland forces across the borders, they are however suspects in several investigations relating to the spontaneous combustion of Personal vehicles belonging to several more "liberal" politicians who speak openly against the war effort.



Florida system:
(Liberty)
The Florida system is essentially a hot bed for smugglers, Slave traders & all sorts of commerce that is frowned upon by the law, It is how ever the only Major Liberty system that legalized gambling and so while there is a strong under world presence in Florida, there is also the "legitimate" business by Spa & cruise. In 816 there was a need to sure up defenses In Texas, Liberty tactical planners feared that Rhineland may attempt a Back door maneuver into Newyork By going through Florida to Penn system. This resulted in a strong naval presence being established in Florida but as the war Progressed it became obvious that Rhineland no longer had the logistical means to mount a Invasion of Newyork, Florida than became a staging ground for the press into Rhineland territory in Late 817.
( serves as a Naval way point for the war effort, Smuggling way point with its abundance of Jump holes, Trades in allot of black market goods ( if you can get past the naval patrols) )

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[Charo]

I don't see a place for it. my reasons?

1) You cannot just introduce new systems/factions just like that with no planning/RP/backstory
2) Cannot just introduce a new house (Phillipenes if I'm reading it right)
3) Too late for system submissions, and even then you would need to say what they contain, and a lot of credits for them
4) Devs have enough work with current systems then adding a bunch of new ones with no templates.


Maybe if you come up with good stories for all this, reasons, and get people involved, it would be good for 4.87

P.S. Ontario is already a system under Liberty control

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[sovereign]

Pardon my bluntness, but what the hell is this?

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[Linkus]

No more new systems unless they tie in nicely to the storyline or have a proper purpose.
Proper purpose does not include "Just cause"

New factions have no reason to exist.

Storyline seems alright except the Rogue thing and the politics.


While your intentions are good, what you propose doesn't make much sense and won't be used.
Probably.

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Facilitating the rise of robotics since 0 A.D.

[ShadowKnows]

Modified upon responces

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