This is a story about my life

[Ness]

Here you can read about it.

And feedback goes to this thread.

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Story about Godric Edmund
Feedback

[Implosion]

The green you decided to use can't be read on the Deep Blue color scheme.

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| [Youtube Channel] | [Daniels] [X] [X]  | [Jessica Scarlet] |

[sadtranslation]

Also, you miss the dots. The storyline is too concentrate for me, but I find it nice, the second part especially. Also, Rheinland makes your story 40% better. :3

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[Manuel Smith]

The green you decided to use can't be read on the Deep Blue color scheme.

I agree, it is hard to read.

Do have the most peoples here the blue background? If yes, you should change the font color.

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