Royal Special Forces

[Tijno]

Royal Special Forces

RSF is group of freelancer how fight for money

The Founder: Admiral Tijno Powders ( ingame {RSF}{A}Tijno.Powders )

The Story:
it al began with a group of refugees who were leaving Bretonia for the war with kusari.
they didn'€™t know the escape was a trap. a trap by the kussari naval forces to take prisoners.
but there was a group of lane hackers how safe them from kusari naval forces.

The lane hackers where on a trading mission to get cardimine for the rouges. so they were heading to liberty.

the lane hackers dropt them of at the barier gate station, they were so kind that they give the refugees one ship a rusty old ship.

the leader of the group(Tijno.powders) was getting the ship because he got experience with flying.
he was doing missions to get food and luxury for the group and new ships.

but he was to late the whole group died ,but one survived it because he also got a ship .they meet each other the next day at the barier gate station

They have started a new group the Royal Special Forces.

The Ships
All civilian ships see wiki

Techs
Civ.techs

Rep
Hostile
Nomads
Other alliens

Neutral
Everything else

Friendly
Freelancers

ID'€™s&IFF
IFF: Freelancer
ID'€™s: Freelancer ID Mercenary ID Independent Trader ID

for joining got to {RSF}

[Tachyon]

Ohh, ohh noez, so hard to read.
Please fix the grammar, fix the spelling.

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[archie]

I'm not fond of 'Special Forces' since Special Forces are current Military members who are willing to go even further into their military careers and attempt join a special bunch of soldiers by rising above even harder expectations. They certainly wouldn't have admirals or anything fancy, maximum maybe Colonel.

It also looks very untidy, not well thought out, and rushed, I'm going to have to say no.

... Onto the next Dragon? :laugh:

[hansen-dennis@hotmail.com]

Ohh, ohh noez, so hard to read.
Please fix the grammar, fix the spelling.

Yeah, please mate. Read it through and set some dots'n stuff.
I'm sure the storie is great, but to be honest the grammar is too flawed to catch someones interest.

Also.

-Your Affiliations?

-Your favoured ships?

-Tech licenses (If any)

-Your main ally?
Also: Space madness? Care to elaborate?


All in all. You should read through some of the other factions stories. Not to copy them, but simply to get an idea of how to write it all down.

Use their text setup as a template for yours.

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