(02-19-2014, 10:40 PM)david.starr Wrote: 1) Tal, you cannot store cargo in a docking bay, its not made for it, you have nowhere to fix the cargo to.
Actually, almost every depiction of a docking bay or a launch bay that I've seen in science fiction involves a large empty space that's been used for holding cargo along with ships.
(02-19-2014, 10:40 PM)david.starr Wrote: 2) Delete all caps.
But then how will you begin sentences, and write proper nouns?