Opinion on this story

[Xing]

The end of a story
Yes, I believe the "end of a story" finally came to an "end" (and ends up with the introduction fora new story, in fact)

By far, I guess its my boldest story ever. some parts were certainly not real good (I was writting often quickly in order to save time for my studies), but here's the final result. Good or bad, this is the story explaining why Isabelle is now in the Kusari navy, for the curious ones who noticed =P

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[Xing]

Maybe this should be moved to flood, the only way I get feedback seems to be in the backyard~

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[Orin]

Sorry. I've been meaning to read it for a long time now, it's just really long.

After I get my latest project done, I'll try and give you some feedback on this. From what I did read, it's pretty good.

[Gabrielle]

It's four pages long, if i am ever incarcerated with to much time on my hands i promise to read it.

[Xing]

lawl, yeah preferably those story would be read like 1 post/day. Jimmy' are usually much shorter than mine, so it accelerate the reading

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