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Battle of Sigma 13
Offline General Nakazawa
09-02-2006, 07:15 AM, (This post was last modified: 09-02-2006, 07:19 AM by General Nakazawa.)
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COMMS ID:General Nakazawa
Transmition To:Blood Dragon High Command

This is Fleet admeral Nakazawa, I am calling to let you know that there is a fleet of 4 Battleship groups parked outside the Chucogu-Sigma 13 JH. My fighter escort was distroyed in Sigma 19 by a Corsair patrol and my ship only carrys anty cap ship weps, so it wold be nice if you could send a Gunboat group or two to asist. We will draw them away from the JH so that they are not distroyed instantly upon exit.
Please hurry.
General Nakazawa out

Transmition Terminated...
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COMMS ID:General Nakazawa
Transmition To:Gunboat Captains

We managed to distroy 1 Battleship and 3 distroyers in the first few volies. We are curintly pownding away at another Battleship but their fighters are causing some magor damage and my turits arent nearly fast anof to get any were neer them. Please focus on the fighters and the other Gunboats. Ive already lost my main engians and am running on back ups.
General Nakazawa out

Transmition Terminated...
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COMMS ID:Kusari Battleship General, Chin
Transmition To:Kusari Inteligence HQ

We have reason to belive that we are curintly ingaged agenst one of the top leaders of the Blood Dragons, a Fleet Admeral by the name of General Nakazawa. We have taken down his shilds and nocked out his engians but wold like to know if we are to bord and capure him or to just distroy him now. We have 3 Divistions of Mariens onbord and have several bording craft in our bay. I await further instuction.
General Chin out

Transmition terminated...
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COMMS ID:Kusari Inteligance Oficer, Chow
Transmition To:Kusari Battleship General, Chin

We recomend that you atempt to take him alive. He will prove to be verry usfull if we can capture him. If you cold take some of his comand staf as well that wold be even beter.
Oficer Chow out

Transmition terminated...
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COMMS ID:General Nakazawa
Transmition To:All ships in range.

This is the Battleship "Lee Memorial" requesting asistance agenst the Kusari armada. We have taken hevy losses and it apears they are atempting to capture this ship and my crew. I have tried to activate the self distruct but I think they have disabled it some how. I have orderd my crew to abandon ship as we have lost all engians and main power. We are dead in the water. Me and my comand staf have baracaded our selvs on the bridge but are not winning this fight. I plead to all in the area, please help! All of our reinforsments have eather bean killed or fled.

Transmition cut off...
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COMMS ID:Personal line
Transmition To:Generals Yaht

This is General Nakazawa, I am seald in my ready room. I only have a few minuts at the most. All of my comand staf have eather been captured or killed. Inform the Lane Hakers of my situation. They shold know what to do.
AHHH................

Transmition lost...
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Articles Of Interest: Bio | Capure of the General | The Rescue |"Ultimate Guide To Yakuza" | "The Origens of Aaron Koss"
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Offline General Nakazawa
09-02-2006, 06:19 PM,
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Ok i just relized this and this is my first RP story so please coment.

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Articles Of Interest: Bio | Capure of the General | The Rescue |"Ultimate Guide To Yakuza" | "The Origens of Aaron Koss"
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Offline Admiral Yamato
09-02-2006, 09:39 PM,
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Great post, man. Bloody Kusari navy.

Returning with a Vengeance June 2007 Sirius Universal Time.
We are coming.


Characters:
BDBC-Yamato - Talarca Light Battlecruiser
BDBS-Musashi - Kusari Heavy Battleship (to be stolen)
BDF-Shinano - Blood Dragon Fighter *
FL-Monarch (to be commissioned) **


</span> The 大和, Battlecruiser Yamato, is Admiral Yamato's personal yacht and primary combat ship.
<span style='font-size:10pt;line-height:100%'>
The 武蔵, Battleship Musashi, is Admiral Yamato's command center and mobile base of operations for his personal fleet.
* The 信濃, Fighter Shinano, is Admiral Yamato's personal fighter and reconnaisance ship, used for backup purposes.
** The Monarch is a freelance freighter captained by Bretonian Navy veteran, William Earnshaw Jr.

Articles of Interest:
Character Biographies & Profiles | Battle of Honshu-Chugoku | Kyushu Police Raid | Project X777 (Part 1)
Project X777 (Part 2) | The Falcon Battalion | The Rescue of Nakazawa
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Offline marauder
09-02-2006, 09:45 PM,
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Yup, it's a great post.

The kusari navy are a right pain in the butt, I've been bracketed by 3 BS patrols over NT before, took me a week to loot a cruise disrupter again, and the best part of 3 hours to get enough bots to fix my hull too.
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Offline General Nakazawa
09-03-2006, 01:52 AM,
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so no one has any thing more consructive than it was good? i whant critisisam!

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Articles Of Interest: Bio | Capure of the General | The Rescue |&quot;Ultimate Guide To Yakuza&quot; | &quot;The Origens of Aaron Koss&quot;
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Offline Admiral Yamato
09-03-2006, 02:32 AM,
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Well, other than some grammar and spelling errors, nothing truly detracts from a relatively solid plot.

Returning with a Vengeance June 2007 Sirius Universal Time.
We are coming.


Characters:
BDBC-Yamato - Talarca Light Battlecruiser
BDBS-Musashi - Kusari Heavy Battleship (to be stolen)
BDF-Shinano - Blood Dragon Fighter *
FL-Monarch (to be commissioned) **


</span> The 大和, Battlecruiser Yamato, is Admiral Yamato's personal yacht and primary combat ship.
<span style='font-size:10pt;line-height:100%'>
The 武蔵, Battleship Musashi, is Admiral Yamato's command center and mobile base of operations for his personal fleet.
* The 信濃, Fighter Shinano, is Admiral Yamato's personal fighter and reconnaisance ship, used for backup purposes.
** The Monarch is a freelance freighter captained by Bretonian Navy veteran, William Earnshaw Jr.

Articles of Interest:
Character Biographies & Profiles | Battle of Honshu-Chugoku | Kyushu Police Raid | Project X777 (Part 1)
Project X777 (Part 2) | The Falcon Battalion | The Rescue of Nakazawa
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Offline Nightfall
09-03-2006, 02:56 AM,
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Yep, excellent post IMO, I enjoyed reading it.

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The Outcasts consider Siniestre Nube a sacred place for several reasons. Early explorers discovered a jumphole within the depths of the cloud that leads to a strange world of ringed stars and strange craft. All ships in the burrial ground are placed facing that hole to honor the Alien Spirits. - An Outcast rumor
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Offline General Nakazawa
09-03-2006, 04:20 AM,
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Ok i CANT be that good of a wrighter that no one has any thing to say about it.

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Articles Of Interest: Bio | Capure of the General | The Rescue |&quot;Ultimate Guide To Yakuza&quot; | &quot;The Origens of Aaron Koss&quot;
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Offline Angel
09-03-2006, 04:24 AM, (This post was last modified: 09-03-2006, 04:24 AM by Angel.)
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We'll, Maybe more Information, but don't dround it, give the reader tastes of whats going on, without giveing the hole meal, and personal thoughts from characters goes a long way, so we the readers can see where each person is coming from.

Alignment:The Outcasts
Status: Retired
Personal Bio Click here
Current Ships:The BlackPearl
Base Of Operations:Pryde Villa, Planet Malta

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Offline Dab
09-03-2006, 04:33 AM,
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Good examples are "Mayday in Tau-31." "Beginning of the End." "Twilight of Peace." And "Ghosts of the Past." Threads. They all show very good posts and examples of RP. Definitely look at Kane's posts. And Angels. Mine are pretty good as well. Virus almost as good as me. We are the main 4 RP posters..

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