Rageborne Feedback

[Leo]

https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthrea...tid=157887

Rageborne is a follow up/wrap up of my Jacob Keller/Nemesis arc that's been going on for a while. I've tried to locate the old stories that I wrote but wasn't able to locate the entirety of them. Instead, in the second post, I did a "cliffnotes" recap of the previous stories as well as a couple of events that happened in game involving Nemesis. The only thing not reflected in game is that there isn't a "Harvester Dreadnought" ship in the game, only a Cruiser (at least there didn't used to be).

Please let me know what you think below. I'm having a lot of fun writing the last "saga" of the story.

~Leo

[Keller]

I've sent you two private messages, one because I forgot a secondary but equally important fact. Both our characters currently use the same illustrations. Names being similar is less of an issue, but it's a little awkward seeing the similarity after having established my own character.

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"Knowing Humanity - We will be duty, bloody and unavoidable."

[Leo]

I've had Jacob Keller established as a character since 2007 when I first registered on the forum 11 years ago. As for the picture, I'll be happy to change that out for another, the name however I will not be changing. Hope you understand.

~Leo

Edit: Picture changed.