Story feedback - Paula Kirschner

[Diana.Daymarova]

You can express how much you dislike my way of RP in this thread. xD

I started this roleplay a few days ago. It's about an amnestic lady, trying to gain all the knowledge from her past life. She begins to meet new people while exporing the Kusari and its around. You can read more in these threads:

https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthrea...tid=157068
https://discoverygc.com/forums/showthrea...tid=158367

I accept any form of criticism, so feel free to comment on everything. RPing without knowing what to improve just doesn't feel that great.

I'm bad at writing stories. xD

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[Diana.Daymarova]

Bump
Don't be afraid to judge.

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[MANRY]

More please thanks

[Diana.Daymarova]

More please thanks

Thank you for your feedback. :3

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[Diana.Daymarova]

Bump
Please, people. I want to know what to improve.

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[-Rax-]

I like how you write. Kathleen's one is very good . I didn't read Paula's. Tbh you should also like Diana Daymarova's one or idk.

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[Diana.Daymarova]

I like how you write. Kathleen's one is very good . I didn't read Paula's. Tbh you should also like Diana Daymarova's one or idk.

Thanks for your feedback. I'm higly self critical, you know that well. xD

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