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Offline Shiki
03-03-2018, 09:47 PM, (This post was last modified: 03-03-2018, 09:48 PM by Shiki.)
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I would like you to share your thought about this RP project of mine.

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Offline Backo
03-03-2018, 09:48 PM,
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I just read the story and it's great. Can't wait to see more.

My only complaint is Ema sounds awfully close to Enma. You should really think of new original names.

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Offline Kiith
03-03-2018, 09:50 PM,
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Oh. but this just creates an extra level of connectivity between all these important, yet distant characters.

Great work, Shiki! One can really see you went to great effort creating a relatable yet enjoyably strange soon-to-be protagonist!

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Offline Shiki
03-03-2018, 09:50 PM,
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As for the name, if I am honest, I used a name generator. And this is just a coincidence. But othewise I would like to hear some real criticism.

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Offline Backo
03-03-2018, 09:52 PM,
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(03-03-2018, 09:24 PM)Shikizumi Wrote: That's the sort of woman he was.

Was -she- born a man? Or is it a typo? With you I can never know. So please clarify.

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Offline Yaoquizque
03-03-2018, 09:54 PM,
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This is the best piece of role-play I have ever read. Can't wait to read more.

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Offline Apollon
03-03-2018, 09:55 PM,
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Please delete.

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Offline Shiki
03-03-2018, 09:56 PM, (This post was last modified: 03-03-2018, 09:58 PM by Shiki.)
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(03-03-2018, 09:55 PM)Ghostazarashi Wrote: Please delete.

Excuse me my friend? You could've delete your post by yourself, as far as I am aware you are a moderator.

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